Reviews for After the First Task
AslansHow24 chapter 5 . 6/22
honestly.. training an eleven year old to kill a monster would hace been irresponsible.. Hermione should not speak for Harry and if she had any brains shed realize that Harry deserved a life
Guest chapter 17 . 6/17
Skipped this chapter mostly. It was filler and added nothing to the story. These are a waste of time.
tomascatts chapter 6 . 5/1
I wanted to like this story, I really did. Unfortunately your awful spelling and atrocious grammar killed it. Kudos for trying.
UnknownVoid25 chapter 19 . 4/27
Ignore the Greengrass Harry look-alike child conspiracy thing in the epilogue, and it's a solid and pretty enjoyable story to read through imo.
tricorvus chapter 19 . 4/13
I adored that
rock on
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 19 . 4/10
A wonderful story here.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10
Nice work
PurpleArrowhead chapter 5 . 4/6
Hermione s dad needs an xxxl black refuse bag
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20
Dj
Brockster550 chapter 6 . 3/7
I wonder if Arthur kicked Molly out of the Burrow and is in the process of filing for divorce. Ron and Percy are taking after their mother in personality to continue talking trash on Harry and his relationship with Hermione.
Brockster550 chapter 5 . 3/5
Molly trying to act like Harry's mother was the wrong move. Ron smirking behind his mother's back just made it worse. Nice to see Dumbledore admitting his mistakes and assuring that he'll do what it takes to earn the trust back. Fudge should step down since he's way too incompetent to be minister.
Brockster550 chapter 4 . 3/5
Hooray, Neville finally asked Luna to be his girlfriend! It's only a matter of time before Ron crosses the line.
Brockster550 chapter 3 . 3/5
Given Ron's nasty comments regarding Eloise, he deserved to go solo. I wonder what Molly's howler to Ron will say and if his father may join in on the howler to double-team Ron in the form of taking turns yelling.
Brockster550 chapter 2 . 3/5
Ron's big mouth is certainly catching up to him. Nice to see Snape's colleagues ripping his arse for his unjustified behavior, especially involving Harry. If Ron tried to ask Fleur out here like he did in canon, it would be funny to imagine Fleur taking matters into her own hands if he tried ogling her and drooling all over. Aces to Neville for teaching Ron a lesson. Ron should consider himself lucky that all he got was a bloody nose.
Brockster550 chapter 1 . 3/5
It was nice of Harry and Hermione Luna under their wing, and for Ginny to truly get over that silly fangirl crush. Ron's reputation will get worse for calling Hermione that derogatory word, news travels fast throughout the castle. Dumbledore appears to be up to his crazy games again, I can't wait to see them fall beneath his feet.
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