| Reviews for Assassin Guardians |
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Pichu chapter 11 . 5/23/2015 The story is continued, the story can be found on AireSong "Writer" |
MiracleShine chapter 11 . 11/22/2014 Wish you continued this story! It was such a boss! Sometimes I didn't understand some stuff(Misty and May get killed and then the next chapter I find them ALIVE due to some time thingy I don't know). But besides that, this story had a lot of potential! 10/10 |
random reader chapter 11 . 9/6/2014 why do all the good stories stay unfinished? T.T |
Pokegirl185 chapter 11 . 10/11/2013 I cant find ur AuthorOfHope account |
Clanclaws chapter 3 . 9/17/2013 OR IT MAY BE THAT THE PHONE WAS CUT FROM CONNECTION FOR ETERNITY. Lol... it MAY be the phone was cut from connection for ETERNITY. Am I the only one who find this funny? |
Slapwave chapter 4 . 3/21/2012 I LOVE DEFENSE! I started laughing after that part. |
LovelyLily13 chapter 4 . 8/22/2011 My FAVORITE part is when Gary shouts "What's wrong with you?" at Leaf. But what I'm looking forward to is Pikachu accidentally shocking someone. Lates *Does peace sign and pose* - |
LovelyLily13 chapter 3 . 8/22/2011 Aaaaawww. I liked Victoria. I saw myself in her. Slightly evil, but adorable and caring. Also I like your story. It's like I'm watching a movie! But still...Victoria dying just ripped my heart out. Lates... *Does peace sign and pose sadly* TT~TT |
aznpandagrl chapter 1 . 8/14/2011 Oh my Arceus, should I be reading this at night? |
XBlazingVampire5X chapter 11 . 4/15/2011 Restarting this story may be a good idea. Sometimes it can be confusing (Dawn's nightmare, I didn't get that), or jump too quickly, but the plot and the cliffhangers and the descriptions of their emotions are really good! If you do restart, please don't change the plot! Most of it you could keep but some of it may need to be rewritten slightly. This has made me want to write a similar story, so thanks! One more thing, I can't find your new fanfiction profile, AuthorOfHope. I've searched for it on fanfiction and it doesn't come up, and I've also searched for this story to see if I could find the new version, but again I can't. If you could would you please post a link to your new profile and the new Assassin Guardians (if you've started it) so that I can find it! I really want to find your new profile! Thanks! XBlazingVampire5X |
jamieS chapter 8 . 2/6/2011 u killed may and misty what the fuck! |
xnightdx chapter 1 . 9/18/2010 I love your story It makes me wanna write an killer story! About this kind of stuff... ) |
espeonsweetie chapter 4 . 8/6/2010 You are one GREAT author! I love this story and i hope you keep continuing. My fave parts are the ikarishipping parts but not so much the arguing (even tho thats what makes it) You rock! _ |
amv4eva chapter 11 . 8/1/2010 In response to your question... ...my first response is "NO NO NO! FINISH THE STORY COME ON COME ON WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN OMG OMG!" But I think you should do the rewrite, when I think twice. Sometimes in this it's confusing, like when you don't really know who's talking at a certain time or other. The characters-falling-for-each-other thing is also kinda jumpy. Like when Drew randomly just falls in love with May, or Ash falls in love with Misty like, BAM. (of course, that sometimes does happen, but in this case...) what i mean is, yes, please do a rewrite. fast. so I can go back to the "OMG OMG!" fangirl stuff. L-O-V-E the story, by the way. the Assassin fanfics are always the best |
Annalynn Roe chapter 11 . 7/29/2010 I think that might be a good idea, it's a cool story but kinda hard to follow I'd love to read the new version if u decide on making it good luck either way! |