I really like this! I think you get Mrs. Lovett's character down really well. I love the "tick tick tick" and how you use that to show Mrs. Lovett's everyday life, and I love the closing sentences!

Found it!

I think it's wonderful, a very true short character study that says a lot of Nellie without using many words :)

Salut!

J'adore le votre ecriture!Il est triste, mais bon! je vous prie de faire ecrivez plus Sweeney Todd!J'aime votre style!

il est adroit.

It's been a while since I have written a little bit of French. I'm still studying, but I thougt I would take a try at it again. My apologies if my translation is horendous...

Merci, cher! Au revoir!

-MoonlitSerenity

Good work for a first time :)

Az! Such a beautiful, well thought out fic.. I feel sorry for Mrs Lovett :(.. Her feelings were spot on, and it was a nice portrayal of how she feels about losing her beloved husband.

Great work.. You should write more ST fanfics :D

-Sarah x

Aw poor Mrs. Lovett, she does deserve happiness. Poor dear. Great story. Are you planning to write more? Still very beautiful fanfic.