Wonder who she has left behind? I love Egyptian History, all the more so if Shizuru and Natsuki are in it. I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next.

I liked it very much. I love Egypt and to have it in an fanfic is great. _ I look foreword to your next chapters. *_~ Till then keep up the really good work. *_*

Shizuru must have a pretty strong will to hold this long, with her attraction to Natsuki. Also, she must hold her position very serious to keep away from a serious relationship or get into a sexual relationship with anymore.

If Mai was attracted to Natsuki and Natsuki couldn't hold her sexual appetti at bay, than there is no doubt that they will find themselve sleeping in bed again. LOL

It was good that Shizuru is trying to keep her distance knowing her attraction to Natsuki because one touch could lead to something. And I don't know if I want to see Shiznat there yet, to just randomly sleep together to get rid of the attraction...that's too much for me to take...not at least ShizNat find out what's pulling them.

There is no doubt in my mind that Mai and Natsuki will sleep again according to the inform you provide me with your PM..so long as the attraction is there. Unless, either both of them or NATSUKI find a way to pull herself together and get a crip of herself...Sorry, but Natsuki is a beast..*cough*

I think that until she really want something is when she'll get cure...or was there such thing to cure her sexual attraction? LOL :P

Now what's happening? Toward the end, it feels as if Shizuru was worrying about something. Good, keep yourself busy Shizuru so you don't think too much! :D

Is Natsuki a soldier?

Because she's not acting like it, what about

her mission?

When Shizuru welcome Natsuki into her home I'm a little confused why Natsuki said: "But, Mai…" Natsuki blurted out as Shizuru turned to her again. "

? Was she concerned that either her or Mai will get into each other's bedsheet again? If so, Natsuki doesn't have much of a strong will. Imagine how she, a warrior, could be seduce by a beautiful woman and was kill in bed. Yeah, a warrior, but if lust could kill even a warrior who was so into lust that she abandon her warrior instinct for a second, and withinn that second...it could take her life.

Of course, if she wasn't concern about her own lusty control with Mai and it would be a different issue. I still don't get why she said..."but Mai"... Or did she mean that she want to continue her affair with Mai and didn't want to hurt the woman if she jump at Shizuru. I just don't know how well control Natsuki could be if she's so attractive to Mai...I fear that before she know it, she will wake up in bed with Mai even where she come visit the Palace...is that what Natsuki was worry about?

I pray Shizuru last long before she expire to her desire. A part of me was thinking that maybe Natsuki might stay away from Shizuru b/c she cares for the woman and didn't want to hurt her so she mess around with others (sighs). B/c she cares that she cannot dare to take action.

i guess i'm more confused..i think i lost track of why the princess natsuki came to visit...

Thank for update.

very upset about this Natsuki...i thought she's umm stronger than this but it's not my position to judge her right? hope that whoever's her lover'll forgive her...

i wonder that if shizuru know about this what she's gonna do? u know,mai's her sister...don't u think it umm immoral if it's Shiznat?

Good grief Natsuki!
I have a bad feeling about this.

Hmm, for some reasons the feeling that I get out of this chapter is fake. As if someone force them to have sex, play each other and move on to the next stage. The mood changed so quickly and it makes one feel as if this whole thing wasn't necessary, like we could have skip this part of something feeling of that sort. Oh, well...if they are using each other to pass by every day than I kinda feel sorry for them...I was hoping that Natsuki could be a little stronger than that. Loyalty with some kind of 'her' own moral.

yeah, Natsuki is a royalty and one would expect "some" loyalty to have affair but I didn't expect it from Natsuki. The way she was in the first two chapter was very different from the two new chapters, as if she has personality disorder or something. From the first two chapters, I got the impression that Natsuki was faithful to her lover, the one of a kind "loyalty"...not someone going around and bedded any woman. Who would have guess that Natsuki could easily be seduce esp. women with 'big' breasts...Well, then...I wouldn't be surprise if she had already bedded half of her maids! :P

Aside from that, I like that Shizuru think of herself as The Pharaoh. Just that thought give her a very strong and power aura to her. Someone with great confident and courage. Someone that give out the aura of "I rule the world"...She seems to be very intelligent but hide most of it...Oh, goodness, I hope she didn't bedded half of the maids too...At least the way she was presented doesn't seem like she was that type of woman...I could be wrong...since my impression about Natsuki was way off :P
But one of them could at least be faithful or loyalty to those she love in order to change the other...

Thank for update...Mai&Natsuki? that's very surprise! interesting in Mai but didn't in Shizuru?

O-KAY?

woa, swet, ant here i tought that it was shiznat jajaja

Err, what just happened? Mai and Natsuki? I'm taken by surprise and would be more so if they slept together and continue to live under the same House. How could they pretend things btw them didn't happen? It seems Mai wanted to be own by Natsuki and if Natsuki give in to desire/lust and did end up sleeping with Mai...I'm afraid she could not get rid of Mai...And what about Shizuru? Mai is Shizuru's sister, I hope Natsuki is aware of that even thought she is lusty right at the moment. I don't want to think that Natsuki couldn't control herself in front of any 'naked' woman..she's not a womanizer is she? I hope they didn't sleep together and Natsuki come to her sense...in this chapter they were about to..

"Natsuki could only think about removing Mai's dress and doing as she wished, but there was someone else. Someone who was very close and would not take this well." ..

HM..I wonder who Natsuki mean by this someone? Mikoto? Shizuru? or her other woman at home?

Natsuki has a lover? what about Shizuru? i thought this story's Shiznat from the story's 's not?

read it fro the first time...interesting story.i'll wait for the next.

Interesting to see who comes out on top the great warrior

or the Pharoah.