Love it. Wish it was longer, but this is great. Something simple, yet cool.

It's offical, licking lip gloss off after you put it on happens to everyone. And here I thought it was just me. lol. I think I have a sneaking suspicion as to where Shawn wants that lip gloss. But that alas is a story for another day and an idea to perv on later.

Aw, that was cute, sweet, and simple. I never thought that lip gloss could be that good. I lol'd about Shawn inviting Jeff to Denny's too, cause that's where Shawn took his wife on their first date. That was a great thing to allude to, whether purposefully or accidentally. Now I keep thinking of Jeff licking his glossy lips, that's so cute heehee.

Super cute~! Loved it!

.: TMM :.

Looks like Jeffy is going to have some fun. Cute story.

I thought this was really cute. Lots of fluff which works since a lot of people like HBK to painted as cocky and confident and Jeff as kind of shy.

The idea behind the lip gloss was something I've never read in a slash fic before so it made for a cute short drabble.

Not everyone makes a good first person fix but I think you did a good job. Hope you continue to write and before you know it, you'll be writing novel length fics.

Good job!

~Nef

That was so cute. Me like.

That was cute. Heh, Shawn's a little devious, isn't he?

Aw,that was cute!