...where do I even begin? This is the darkest and most scarring thing I have ever read. I hate it so much, but at the same time I’ve NEVER been so emotionally invested into something like this before. You’ve done such a phenomenal job writing it that it’s just incredible. And in the end I can’t help but love it. I dont know how you’ve done it but your story is outstanding. I can’t wait to read more. Please keep the updates coming.

This was awesome! I wonder how Ash is gonna get out of this mess.

Apenas vi el capitulo en mi mail, sali corriendo a verlo!
es bueno saber que estas de vuelta!

Cliff Hanger! I'm surprised the cave has resisted so much battering, especially when the ones fighting are strong Pokemon. That being said, it's funny how Mew is still toying with Lugia and Lance. It makes me feel confident he has everything under control. I really wish it stays that way, not sure how many more emotional roallercoasters I can take.

It's amazing to read a Pokemon battle following in-game mechanics of four moves per Pokemon. Feels like I'm watching VGC and you're the commentator.

It was a short chapter but a lot of things have been going on. I like the descriptions of the cave and battles but I would like to see more consistency when describing. Some sentences feel rushed and although they make sense I get lost because I'm still imagining the previous description. It's something tricky when having actions in the same area (sort of like a final battle) but it's important to avoid making the jumps from one battle to another without binding them together. There was a moment when a blast shook the cave from above and Gyarados roared below, that was a good transition but the rest felt jumpy.

Keep up the writing and please update soon 3

Cuando subirás el ? :(

This was amazing! Keep it up!

OH. MY. GOD. This chapter was amazing! I have loved this story for years and have reread it so many times. I love your writing style and every update has made me so happy. Lance is so evil and is such an interesting character. I really like how in-depth their storylines are. I feel for both Ash and Gary and can't wait for them to be reunited. I love whomp Ash and I'm going to hell for how much I loved his pain. I can't wait for the rest of this story and I am super excited to find out what you have planned. I love the Mew angle and I know you're gonna have a brilliant next chapter planned. Thanks for your wonderful story

Definetely a fun chapter to read (out loud!) glad Ash cried less during the chapter. I think he ran out of tears after so much Lance torture. Personally I would have gone into further detail in the opening scene... just me maybe. Still enjoyed it.

The jumps from scene to scene were confusing sometimes. I can imagine it working if it becomes a movie but the transition cuts confuse in writing since our imaginations work in differently. I sure hope it becomes a movie someday... rated R?

Excited to know the story is coming to a close. I am very curious as to how Lance is defeated and if there will be any consequences for him raping Ash so many times.

Will Ash transition from cry baby to baby to hero?
Will Gary be able to save Ash and keep Mew out of harms way?
Will Gary ever finish his thesis?

Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter 3

Que alegría!
Nuevo capítulo!
Lo estuve esperando hace mucho y me emocioné cuando vi que has actualizado!
Es una lástima que sea el último capítulo, pero me pone muy feliz que ya estemos llegando al final!
Es bueno saber que Gary finalmente ha llegado para salvar a Ash!
Justo a tiempo, ya que él parece haberse rendido con Lance!
Veremos que tal sale todo para el próximo capítulo
Un abrazo ñ.ñ

Me pasé por aquí y todavía no hay actualización
Porqueeeeee!?
Quiero saber que pasará con ash

Ash’s been tortured for too long it’s time he’s finally got saved from the trauma, it’s time the three-year-long nightmare ends, it’s time Gary does something to make up for the mistake he made years ago and to show what he could do for his love. What happened to Mew and Lance? And why Paul seemed to have known something? So eager to read more!
Thank you for your excellent work! Looking forward to your updating!

This story is amazing! Please update!

Me pasé por aquí y todavía no hay actualización
Porqueeeeee?

Holaaaa
Se extraña mucho tu historia!
Por favor no la dejes!
Espero desde hace mucho actualización y que pasara con Ash!

Cute chapter! On the edge of my seat the whole time... not sure if due to the nerves it created or the expectation of another sex scene between Lance and Ashy boy. Seems he is always so vulnerable and defenceless, I'm starting to believe he likes to be dominated all the time!

Continue writing stories, it is always a pleasure to read what's on your mind. I know it takes time but I'm glad you're happy to share it with a larger audience.

Please update! But take your time :P