Jacob Ports: *Smells Mikan Yuuki's feet*

Mikan Yuuki: Hehehe... You like my feet?

Jacob Ports: Yeah.

Mikan Yuuki: I love you, Jacob.

Jacob Ports: I love you too, Mikan.

I know that you're most likely never going to write another RitoxMikan fic, but I'll just say this anyway: this one-shot was AMAZING! It was so well written and I could feel Mikan's emotions when she described he feelings on loving Rito. You may never come back to write another To-Love Ru fic, but I thank you for leaving this masterpiece behind.

Wow man that was...WOW keep writing good fics like this one this was the best lemon

Just one word to describe it, amazing. I am working in a fic of the same couple RitoxMikan is called "sin restricciones" is in Spanish if you wanted you could have a look of it or even further It will be a pleasure working together in a new history. That's all, write me if you are interested. Bye

I read this like five different times.

Love it I want more lol.

Nice

Very well written. I could feel every feeling and every moment of this fanfic. All of Mikan's hidden feelings, dire and lust were all portrayed with elegance!

This was really good, I love you'r writing style, and the lemon was done wonderfully! I can't believe this was you'r first time writing one. Thank you for writing this, keep up the great work!

I love your story it was great.

really enjoyed this fanfic. would really like for you to write a sequel to it

This is the best To Love-Ru fanfiction that I have read all day. I have recently finished To Love-Ru and read as much of TLR-Darkness than is posted at the moment.

This fanfiction is full of detail and feelings. I could picture it and feel Mikans emotions. Amazing, considering it is your first 'sexual' fic.

I hope I can read more in the future.

D'awwww

Cute, and well written.

Very well done, my compliments.

Despite I've never read or watched To Love Ru, I've found the openings on Youtube and gathered infomations on the story by Wikipedia (and found some hentai on it too XD), so I can say your fanfic is very good, thematically, grammatically and structurally. (are those words right? O_o)

I have not problems with the incest idea, so I liked this story very much: the feelings are very well described, and don't worry for the descripion parts, I appreciated them very much (XD).

Incest theme is in my fic Harry Potter Sexy Version too, and reading this I know you will not be disgusted by it _.

As other said, there are a couple of errors with the "onii-chan" appellatives, but the composition (lines, different nattative times, different types of letters) is optimal.

I'll read your compositions on Harry Potter and Clannad (I'm glad you like that anime too, I cannot stop crying watching it. ç_ç) and I'll tell you.

Ci sentiamo presto. _

excellent story and I want a continue...and to start to work in your Rito-Mikan serious story (sorry for my gramatical errors, but english isn't my native language)...Really, you have to write that story...I'll be waiting for that, bye