Great story. So sweet, hot and beautiful.

Hm... I like this.

Thanks for writing.

Ah, that was beautiful. I love it.

I like the second-person perspective, because it drew me in a lot more than usual. Even though it was a very short fic, you managed to build up an incredible sense of detail, which is only achieved by those of writing finesse. For this reason, the single scene was engaging and beautiful - well done!

VERY well written. I love it.