Oh my god... XD This is so creepy and hilarious at the same time! Man, Kid must be so embarrassed...

make more please! T_T

are u going to do any more or is that all ?

Yes because a condom totally helps you make babies...

Poor Crona! She's probably just like 'the fug?'

No! You must sequel this amazing story!

Poor Crona...

no NEED MORE CHAPTERS

ohh could you continue?

even though i think of Crona as a guy, i would still like to read this! update? :3

Please update! :3

I really like this! It is very interesting! But... Why did Medusa erase their memorys. I noticed that Kid seems like he remembers, on he inside, while his out side self is just crazy and perverted! (XD) I geuss I can sort've understand why Medusa would want them to has a baby. Cause he's the Shinigami's son and all, but damn that would be awkward! I hope you update this just because I am anxious to find out what happens next and if you have any plot in mind.

Medusa is hilarious in this! I love it.

Dude, not to be a jerk and flame you, but this is awful!

Now, since I'm not a total asshole, I'll give yuh some of Abby's good ole constructive criticism :)

Now, for one, you need more plot development. Why did Medusa want to make Kid lose his memory, how did the get back to Medusa's home, why Kid would act perverted because he just lost his memory, not his manors or personality.

Be more descriptive, this is almost totally dialogue. Put more actions between what they're saying.

Keep them in character, Medusa is waaaaay OOC.

In my own personal opinion, boldface gets tedious. Use italics, it's easier on the eyes.

Spellcheck.

Use a thesaurus. Seriously, the thing is any writer’s best friend. It makes you sound more educated, and the story more professional. It also just makes it cooler :)

No authors notes in the story! I can't begin to describe how awful that is! AN's in the middle of a story, is often the sign of an experience-less, and bad writer.

So don't do it!

Now, this is just a suggestion, but use a line break when you go to the authors note at the end. Often times, people confuse that with the story. (Guilty as charged XD)

Of course, they'll realize it afterward but still, it's just easier. And, for all it's worth, put AN before it :)

Dear God, make sure you proofread!

You're going to need to change this rating if Kid's going to "Show Chrona how making babies works." (Witch BTW is a ridiculous excuse to write a lemon)

Here, I'll re-do a little bit of the last chapter for you to show you all the things I mean:

Kids Point of View

"Crona." I murmured, moving my hands groggily around the mattress. It was empty, I felt no one there; acting on this discovery, I opened my eyes.

"Crona?" I called. She wasn’t on the bed, where I’d last saw her, or in the room at all for that matter. Suddenly, as if on cue with my thoughts, the door slammed open, and in tumbled a nervous looking Crona.

There she is. I thought to myself triumphantly.

"I told you to stay there!" Medusa's powerful demand echoed through out the spacious room.

"B-but… Medusa-sama, I don’t know how to handle this!” She shouted through the now closed and locked door, looking saddened.

I quietly crawled out of the large bed bed, planning on sneaking up on her. "Why is that?" I asked lowly into her ear, resting my chin on her shoulder and I wrapping my arms lovingly around her slender waist.

"Kid-kun! I… I… I-" She struggled for the right words in that adorable stutter of hers.

"Need to be punished." I finished for her, a seductive grin adorning my face, and I began playing with her hair, twirling the soft uneven pink locks between my fingers.

“H-how?” She questioned fearfully, obviously thinking I was going to hurt her. I smirked when an idea struck me.

“Strip.”

Crona’s eyes widened in disbelief, he lips parted partially, and she looked at me as if I’d asked her to… well, strip.

“Wh-what!” She squeaked, “I don’t think I can deal with striping…” She muttered, more so to herself, her eyes averted to the ground next to us.

"Here let me help you." I grabbed her hand, pulling her up with me as I stood, then pushed her forward with my body, and we both fell onto the bed, myself on top of her.

why does madusa want chrona to have a kid with kid. does she whant to be a gandmother or something?