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   GeminiEyes chapter 11 . 1/24 Would love to see the rest of this story as well as the sequel from witches of twilight. |
| booneful chapter 11 . 6/16/2019 Have really enjoyed reading this. Hope to see new chapters soon :) |
| KateTheCat chapter 9 . 9/21/2018 A Bella coma. OMG. That is just so adorable. |
| Rita01tx chapter 11 . 6/8/2017 Never heard of Carmilla or Polidori's Vampyre {although I just had a brain fart of Andrew pronouncin' it VamPYRE in an episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer...which I still love to this day but not Angel until Spike joins in the last season}. However, the scariest vampire stories I ever read were in the Necroscope series written by Brian Lumley *shudder!* So far, 2017 has been a very good year as far as authors returnin' after a long hiatus to complete their fics {fingers crossed for Jadalulu's Fold Your Wings} so I've got you on alert, just in case *wink!* Oh, and feel free to PM me if you find yourself needin' someone to bounce ideas off of! |
| Rita01tx chapter 10 . 6/8/2017 Alice's blank future visions of Edward don't bode well...more boys about to phase, I'm thinkin'! Which could prove a problem for Bella bein' on the rez unprotected! This is gonna drive our boy crazy! |
| Rita01tx chapter 9 . 6/8/2017 Edward choppin' wood...preferably shirtless *drool!* Edward is gettin' entirely too comfortable there in Forks and Bella's certainly not gonna want to see him go once the paperwork finally gets sorted *sigh!* |
| Rita01tx chapter 8 . 6/8/2017 I always felt sorry for Sam bein' the first to phase...what a scary thing to happen to you with no warnin' whatsoever! And, of course, I'm totally picturin' a team of high school boys burstin' out of their uniforms to chase Edward all the way to the end zone to the tune of screamin' humans LMAO! |
| Rita01tx chapter 7 . 6/8/2017 First, I'm disappointed in the all too brief shower Edward took after the game...I wanted him to physically intimidate those stupid boys LOL! Also, Bella could hardly be blamed for thinkin' he might be bi-polar 'cause his mood swings really do cause whiplash! Hope the meetin' with Billy goes all right 'cause Edward is without the protection of his family! |
| Rita01tx chapter 6 . 6/8/2017 These two tickle me silly LOL! |
| Rita01tx chapter 5 . 6/8/2017 Whatever animosity Bella had created as a defense was pretty much obliterated by Vampward's beautiful music *sigh!* Hmmm, how's he gonna fake sweatin' after a gruelin' football game? |
| Rita01tx chapter 4 . 6/8/2017 It wasn't very nice of Edward to scare Bella like that but her reaction now has him completely fascinated! |
| Rita01tx chapter 3 . 6/8/2017 Edward was so distracted by his conversation with Bella he wasn't even that much bothered by her scent! Must be gettin' acclimated *fist pump!* Hey, he could always hunt while Bella and Charlie are asleep, right? |
| Rita01tx chapter 2 . 6/8/2017 Well, this is the first time I've read a high school Vampward playin' any team sport...bet he forgot he was gonna have to shower with his team mates after every practice and game! Oooh, legends of his junk will have the Bitch Pack snarlin' for blood LMAO! |
| Rita01tx chapter 1 . 6/8/2017 Damn it! Someone on Facebook mentioned Witches of Twilight but I liked this summary more. I was just gonna check this first chapter and got hooked even though it's incomplete *facepalm!* Alice really dropped the ball on this one but looks like it will turn out to be a good thing...well, if only Edward can keep from killin' Bella LOL! |
| Amelia Jordan chapter 11 . 11/9/2014 No constructive comments, just wanted to say this story kicks ass! |
