| Reviews for Breaking from the Darkness |
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Fyoex chapter 8 . 1/28/2011 This is a great story! Please update soon~ |
Evilsangel chapter 8 . 9/21/2010 Not bad I like it. I can't wait to see what else you've got for this story and where it will go, do please update asap! |
PromistDream chapter 6 . 3/27/2010 Nice chapter! :D Though it was a little short. Good luck writing the next chapter and I can't wait to read it! :D |
PromistDream chapter 5 . 3/21/2010 Very cool fic! lol I wonder, how Naruto will react to the food? If he has grown up only on raw meat then will he find ramen and other such human foods disgusting? Also, the timeline is a little confusing. At the beginning of chapter three, it says 200 years later. Then Ankoku said that only 16 years had passed in the demon world. If 200 years passed in the human world, won't everyone already be dead? Overall, it looks like a very interesting fic. Good luck writing the next chapter and I can't wait to read it! :D |
NatsuHotaru chapter 5 . 3/20/2010 Did they kill Naruto's 'father' i thought they'd just trapped him and naruto was going to save him? lol i must of read wrong. Anywho, Haha brilliant acting there naruto, very believable. Can't wait until he meets the rest of the cast~ |
sousie chapter 4 . 3/19/2010 oh they are so evil |
NatsuHotaru chapter 4 . 3/19/2010 YES! now this is getting REALLY good. i just love these situiations! i hope you update really soon because i can't wait to see the situations you put Naruto in and how he makes friends |
NatsuHotaru chapter 3 . 3/19/2010 oh i love Ankoku's name. Brilliant! Haha take that snake demon! Naruto is more awesome then you! NO! Ankoku's not your father! But i like how you twisted it so that Naruto thinks he should kill everyone in Konoha for sealig his 'dad'. One question: what do you mean by incarnation? O this is getting good |
NatsuHotaru chapter 2 . 3/19/2010 Le Gasp! you killed Kushina! i had a feeling you would but still! i was so convinced that she was dying from chakra exhaustion or something but BAM its a demon! I was so angry at it and i did get a little teary but didn't cry. HE TAKES TEH NARUTO! how dare he! this is cool though~ Ah i see what you did there, Wakana is such a nice name lol. And now Minato is dead too *sadface* next chapter! |
sousie chapter 2 . 3/19/2010 update soon |
endlessvamp chapter 2 . 3/18/2010 Interesting. XD I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
NatsuHotaru chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 Wah! So cool! this is an interesting take on the sealing. I see where this is going and i love it! Will Naruto wear a mask in the future? What will happen of Minato and Kushina? (great little scene between them by the way) |