I love this story so much. Wish you'd continue it!

Soooooooo 'effing cute!

Thanx!

Very sweet, clever theme

Aww they were so cute! I loved how awkward they were!

First love is so sweet. Nothing is as tender and èxciting as the first fumbling between two of innocent young lovers. Every little kiss and snuggle seems to be the best anyone has ever explored.

I really liked your story. It was a perfect description of how pure and simple a first love should be..

Sweetly sweets..love it.

This was all kinds of freaking adorable. I felt so bad for the two of them stumbling around each other, not knowing the other was interested. So glad they finally moved past the crunchy stage and they kissed. Boy, did they ever kiss too. Wonderful. Funnythat Carlisle busted them. I am hoping thatbhe didn't see anything. I bet it'll be a very long time before she is allowed to spend the night again, hehehe.

So, so sweet and good! Thx for writing love!

Boy this seems so familiar lol

Ah I forgot this was a one shot! lol that was so cute, I loved it. And Carlisle walking in hahaha.

Very nice :-)

Jus plain sweet and amazing i loved it!

I loved it so sweet and cute I wish there was more thank you

Thank you for the sweetness. I needed it!

So sweet, loved it.