YOU HAVE BEEN CHOSEN.

Your story is now part of Versatile, a C2 for in-character, canon-compliant, and well-written Thiefshipping!

Thanks for sharing such a great story!

This was lovely. The way you described everything was just so creative and unique. I'll have to admit, the dialogue was a bit hard to follow, but that made it just that much better when you did get it. Amazing, wonderful job.

More ART then a mere story, if I do say so myself. I have to say, it was so short, yet so powerful and descriptive, showing so many emotions and so many feelings. In a way, more like a picture- if you wrote this as a fic, I think it would've lost it's 'color', or the 'artsie' part of it, if you know what I mean. Bluntly- I've never read sex described that way. Perhaps the originality of it all gives it flavor. Not perhaps. for sure.

Yes, Bakura, Malik, keep telling yourself that. Get closer. To the pharoah.

~signed with kisses~

This is at least the third time I've read this, so I should really review. And I love it. It has an amazing poetry to it, and it's really unlike any other fic I've come across. Really nicely done.

You have captured thiefshipping and twirled it around your finger. Nicely done.

The writing style was interesting. I like how it was mostly dialogue that left you to your imagination and the sentences just gave short, vague descriptions (but still filled in the blanks). It was hard to keep track of who was talking at some points, but I think it's okay considering the writing style.

Nicely written.

Nice :) A little hard to keep track of who's talking, but maybe that's just me. Other than that I liked it.