Hi :) I was reading this and couldn't help but notice how beautifullly written it is. Keep up the good work! I love the description...lovely adjetives used. Is it totally wierd though that I sang (or at least tried to) your take on Hellfire? Okay. I'm a total freak. Hehe :D

wow. just wow. that was freaking awesome! man I wish I could do something like this.! and I wander what would happen if they both felt that way. then the story would probably have a very different ending! wow just wow! :D :)))))))

This is pretty interesting. A twist to one of the darkest films ever made,even though it is Disney. I like it. Well done!

I must admit I was extremely wary of your description but this... was really impressive. I like the new lyrics - they flow well and don't feel forced. and i love your detail about the effect of Frollo's voice and his status as a hypocrite :) It's a pretty powerful piece, unusual, and well written.

-Dommy-

Wow. You know, I can't believe this actually turned out so good. Judging by the summary, I was rather wary, but it was actually extraordinarily well done. The detail, the song, the general feel of it. One of my favorites, for sure.

thats good! i really like it! a twist 2 hellfire! nice!

Meow! Keep Writeing Pwease! _

Interestingly done. You did a good job of taking "Hellfire" and changing it to fit Esmeralda's point of view. It's not too different from the original.