... this is badly rushed

Question: why would Naruto want the scroll

Ok I'll be honest after reading this, while far better than mine, is still bad due to the pace at the start it doesn't explain why he was neglected, kyuubi presumably, but to anyone that doesn't know the narutoverse well it's unclear at best so while far better than mine, which I have deleted due to hoe bad I felt it was, it has pacing issues and you need to know the Narutoverse well to understand what's happening. Finally you didn't explain how Minato survived I'm currently assuming either the 3rd (don't remember how to spell his name) did the sealing or Minato used a different seal

Sorry if you think this is a flame it's not meant to be it's just problems I noticed

I'm sorry but your c gramer. Sucks badly

Poordialogue. The dialogue does even look on!

WHAT THE FUCK DO U MEAN UR JUST FUCKING LAZY STOP MAKING EXCUSSES

Nice

MAKE SURE NARUTO HAS A SISTER

Can you make more chapters I love this story please It's really good . I am one of your biggest fan

Not Bad. Also I like the idea of having Sasuke trying to bring Naruto back to Konoha. Sounds intresting.

This seems good. I would like to see more of it.

Lame

I loving what you are doing so far in the story. All the stories that I read they make Naruto forgive them so why not make Naruto start his own clan away from them and be his own person. I think that will be cool to see in a story like yours.

i wonder what minato found that scared him.

minato better pray for a quick death.