Reviews for Pygmalion
Rezihue chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Wow. Just amazing. It did not need to be any longer. Thiefshipping at it's best. :) RB
Fictatious chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Wow. This is really powerful. Like, really. And the shortness just seems to crank up the intensity even higher. Favorite for srs.
KMountain chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
It was short but, man, was it gorgeous. The driving home that the Millenium Ring is empty really got me and that last line was wonderful.

Amazing job on this one.
Stepha chan chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
I love you.

You wrote me a story (although you do that sometimes XD ), baked me cupcakes and made me a cannibal-tastic card. 3

The story was cute in a sad sort of way. -.- But I loved it. 8D

And you know me with reviews. I can't describe my love for it. But I do love it.

And for your birthday, I'll write a story 0_o like I did last year. (Even when I said I'd give up writing. DX lolfail)And, of course, draw for you.
neverbirds chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
"He once told Malik that if he had his own heart, he would love him."

Oh, where have I heard that before ;)

But in all honestly, this is beautiful. I was your friend I would be touched and amazed.

You always write so beautifully. This concept is incredible, too. God, thiefshipping is so versatile and f*cked-up, and out of anybody, you've captured it the most perfect. Everything you write is incredible. You have a real talent and man do I appreciate that you use it to write thiefshipping, I really do.

"Try as he might, he will never be a prince, jack, queen, or anything to the Spirit's king." amazing line, really.

Actually, I could quote this entire thing saying it's an amazing line. But this:

"The body he used to haunt. The same one that he would use and abuse. His not-his lips that would suck and bite and kiss. And his not-his hands that would mostly murder and mar and mutilate, but sometimes love. The possessed mouth, and how it would grin."

No line, ever, has captured why thiefshipping is so perfect than this one does. And also, being a literary nerd here, the alliteration on 'murder and mar and mutilate' is just one example of why you're the most talented writer I know. You manipulate words in the cleverest way and it really is a privilege to read your work. Really.

Amazing. I always look forward to what that amazing mind of yours will come up with next.