10 minutes of my life that I'll never get back

História muito boa, faz você ficar preso no computador lendo, fiquei triste com o final mas tudo bem, bela história )

I'm so fucking disappointed in you

Asuka's past doesn't explain her hate for Rei as a "doll" though, or her obsession with Eva superiority.

I understand now, great story by the way

The Eva come from Lilith not adam

How does your spell check get passed ment?

It’s spelt, m-e-a-n-t.

This was gruesome. It's hard to imagine Shinji totally obliterating that guy but I guess with his angel blood it's easily possible. Not my favorite chapter

Shinji finally showing some spine. I loved how he brutalized Asuka's dad. That was pretty epic and clearly Asuka like that as well ;)

This story is great. I love how canon divergent it is with Unit 1. I'm interested in what's going to happen with Shinji and Asuka. They're gradually getting togehef

Where is the next chapter?

Holy OOC, batman
I'm only 7 chapters in but Shinji might as well be a different character, he's wayyyy too alpha in this. Asuka is all tsun, no dere. The whole rape and abuse thing is just cringeworthy. All the spelling mistakes, strange prose, and ALL CAPS RAGE aren't helping either. I want to like this story, and after briefly skimming through some later chapters it seems you learn to use the correct forms of your/you're and there/their/they're and have significantly less spelling mistakes, but holy shit getting to that point is going to be difficult. I know you went back and revise chapter one, I really hope if you ever have any free time you do the same for more of these early chapters.

Thank you for this story bcame across it and simply decoures the story I couldn't stop. Everything is top notch while the ending is not what I hoped I look forward to the sequel. Once agin thank uou for the story
Ciao

I must admit, I personally think that (it's my opinion, please don't hurt me!) the beginning of this fic had a rocky/bumpy start. I was tempted to drop this fic after the 5th chapter, but something else made me continue just to see if it got better, and around about the time when Shinji started piloting Eva Unit 01 more regularly was also when the relationship between Shinji and Asuka picked up - and subsequently so did the fic :)

This was a great story! I really liked the unique AT-Field aspect worked in here, it pretty much turned the tables. I also now finally understand the title, well actually I did much earlier, but basically I was confused what it meant or was referring to when I started reading this.

Ok, now I just gotta get this off my chest; What. The. Fuck? Why?!
*Spoilers* Asuka JUST got her memories back, and then you just HAVE to go and erase them again, and not only that but Shinji's too?! Can't you give them a break? I swear Shinji was pretty much fine throughout this fic, and I can understand the whole thing with Asuka now having a war of 2 identities in her mind if nothing is done about it, but c'mon! I may sound very cliche and I may actually have a poor taste in storytelling, but what's wrong with your typical cliche ending of the couple live happily ever after? I mean, sure it's not good if everyone does it, but when two characters have gone through hell and come back again - after all the crap they've had to endure - they kinda deserve it, much like Shinji and Asuka here in my opinion. People may not like cliches as it's overused, but nowadays everyone is making up non-cliched scenarios so much that now cliches are pretty much less common now... Ok I'm going to end this rant as I have no idea where I was going with it now... :/

Please don't take my rant to mean that I disliked your story, I actually found I quite liked it and couldn't stop reading once the story picked up :) You pretty much made Shinji a reluctant Badass, while also retaining that Shinji trait of constantly questioning himself and others, which I always found irked me a little, but I still like Shinji as a character. Overall, this was a good read that was still worth spending the time to read, even if I personally disliked the ending a little XP

Excuse my sincerity and I deeply apologize if I'm coming off fan crazed, but this story, it's like I've finally reached a form of enlightenment in the eva-verse world. Everything was perfect, even things that seem to add a way of conclusion to Shinji's true nature that I questioned this whole time connected, and it was beautiful. I started reading and judging whether I'd like this version of Shinji and Asuka, then suddenly all doubt evaporated as I read the story and I grew to love these characters even more. These kids though, my god. Your story is pure and dark, thoughtful, open minded, welcoming, yet contradictory, hurtful, painful, bittersweet, but it resolutes with a way to connect with everything that can be even, may I say, "canon" in any of the many eva worlds out there. Heh, I for one believe in multiple dimensions. However, I only wished to fix the small spelling and grammar mistakes that hardly ever intervened throughout the whole story as a con. Then, it'd be out of the nazi grammar judgement pool so to speak. Not like it would change any of its solid substance really. Great characterization and in-character growth, check. Emotional roller coasters and in depth thought situations, check. Strong twists and themes that totally provide that eva feel, check. I know this centralized around Shinji and Asuka, and I love it for that, yet you managed to let in glimpses of everyone else's thoughts and motives and I love it even more for that. I recommend this to everyone, and anyone, and I hope you feel proud of this story because you did amazing. I've immediately started the "Two of Us" and it's truly a gem, another ride that doesn't provide any drag but even more adventure and trip of longing! Great, but great job my friend!