Well you are off to a good start.. I love your note at the end. It shows you have good humor. If you continue this story I would like to see more of that humor please. Other than that. I think this is the start of a fabulous story. I'd like to see where you go with it

Yeah pie! :)

This is so adorably sweet and you captured both of them quite well.

I wish this happened in the movie! Amazing!

Warm feelings. :3 Well done!

Well you made me smile! I wanted Alice and The Hatter to be together :(

I love it this is my firstfanfic and i love it

I love this it so sweet and the pairing is one of my favorites. Who would want to flame this it's cute well done innocent fluff. Great job.

i think i am in love with the hatter's hands now

I loved it! This story definitely made me smile. So cute and romantic! Now I want to be Alice more than ever!

this made me smile, and it made my insides tickle. very cute, highly fluffy. well done!

~MadEclair

Okay first off, brilliant writing. I love your style and can really get into the story you are telling. Secondly, I can't tell what Alice/hatter universe you are speaking of. Are you talking about the Burton movie-verse or what? Maybe it's obvious, but I just can't seem to figure it out. There are so many different ones after all.

This is, by far!, my favorite story on this website!

aaaaaaawwwwww!

It's a wonderfully light and sweet one-shot. I would actually love to see seductive eyebrows though.