| Reviews for The Dancer |
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jcarter692 chapter 1 . 9/13/2018 This story is so adorable! I had to reread it after I saw her was talking about Casey and their daughter. I thought he was talking about Casey and Nora dancing. |
Rosalie chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Very cute story, and the twist with the daughter was nice :-) |
amyh52 chapter 1 . 11/7/2014 Beautifully done. Lots of fun little surprises. |
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
thecanadian13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 I was directed towards your LWD stories from a friend and I must say, I really enjoyed this one. It was really well structured and everything pieced together in the end. I loved the withhold of information; it made the reveal 3/4 through the story that much better. Look forward to reading more. |
NeoCortex chapter 1 . 8/5/2012 I have to say, this one was very confusing at first. I loved it though because after the dance everything fell into place for me. |
cherrycoloredlilies chapter 1 . 1/19/2011 I'm not a Life with Derek fan, I saw one of your stories on another authors favorites page and it intrigued me. I've enjoyed everything I've read so far, your writing is well done and your stories are entertaining. I noticed in this that Liselle is named after a character in a fantasy novel. I was wondering if you got the name from the Mallorean series by David Eddings. I don't often find others who've read his books, but I've never seen that name anywhere else. I've added you to my author alerts, and will look forward to updates and new stories. |
MoneyMatchShip chapter 1 . 3/28/2010 Aw, I really loved this story. I must be really dense, but I didn't get that at the beginning of the story, the girl was the daughter and not Casey. lol, throwing in Justin Timberlake didn't help the matter. I love the end of the story... especially when Derek lied about loving the dance! It was so beautiful! |
bsloths chapter 1 . 3/19/2010 What a glorious little oneshot! I was totally faked out by your trick, but it was so worth it, because that was genius making Casey the teacher. And I liked seeing Sam all grown up, too. And the gun jokes were adorable. (Derek would probably kill me if I said that. I meant, "very manly and typical Derek.") :) I'm dying to catch up on Matramonal and Portent, but school is keeping me so busy. I'll read them soon, I promise! |
InuKaguFan chapter 1 . 3/19/2010 I liked it so much! Really liked the surprise in the end' was sorta confusing at the begining but I enjoyed every minute of reding. You're my favourite LWD writer and I have all of your stories on my favourite list. Good-luck with your future works, can't wait to read more! |
Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 Aww, this was so absolutely adorable. Honestly, it was. How can someone not love super overprotective daddy Derek. Poor man. He has crazy hots for his wife, and his daughter looks just like her, so she's just as beautiful and she's supposed to be his little girl! Not turning on teenage girls. But it's funny how things work out right? I loved it! ~Chica~ |
Lalaith Yamainu chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 Aw... I LOVED how the story changed so much when you realized what was really going on! So sweet. |
LeahBunny chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 That was fantastic. Loved it. |
JoltedReader17 chapter 1 . 3/17/2010 That was so cute, and funny, loved the twists. |
leanaplumz chapter 1 . 3/17/2010 You are by far my fave LWD writer! This has me giggling all the way through... I love that it's a future fic and that the Dasey lovin' isn't dying! |