Awww this was so IC and very cute :) Great job!

I have no criticism, only pleasant commentary about this fanfiction and all your other works. I am really looking forward to the day you once more take up your pen and write 1869 stories. I adore your works, your writing style and the way you make them so in character. This story I particularly like and your other work, Playing House. The way you portrayed vampire Hibari was so canon, had I not known this anime was KHR, I would have believed this was a BL show, with truly a vampire and a demon as its main cast. I do not know what else to comment, since this contains absolute perfection, and you cannot comment on anything that is perfect for all you are permitted to say will be 'It is perfect'. I implore you to write more, or at least consider writing a novel of your own. I really, really do enjoy your writing style.

I heard somewhere that Hibari's canon name as a vampire is Hibarin. :D
Beautiful onehot by the way
Very much love sent your way

B'aww 3 I love your little 1869 stories :D So cuute and sexy at the same time 3

ADORE. I love love love this pairing (Mukuro-uke! Hibari) and your writing style is lovely. Both Mukuro and Hibari are in character, which is a rarity. You and this story are going onto my favorites list.

This is beautiful. *_* There aren't many 1869s as opposed to 6918s so this fic truly brightened my night. Do continue to write beautiful fics for this pairing good lord I beg of you. 3

Some parts seem to be written bluntly but it's understandable since this is Mukuro and Hibari we are talking about 3 Guess they just don't feel the need to express the reasons for every action. The sexual part parts were vague, a fact that I can't decide whether I liked or not. I do love them detailed and filled with action but on the other hand, the short little scenes help explain their indifference.

the plot was very interesting. supernatural creatures always fascinated me but you covered not only that, but their relationship and how it gradually changed as well. it was a treat, reading your story. good luck on your future ones! you're a very good author.

Oh, I ever read this fic before.

I think it's from LJ. XD;;

Great fic, btw. I really like it. X3