Aww... Silver has a girlfriend, Silver has a girlfriend!

Excellent use of second person. That tense can be difficult to write in but you utilized it flawlessly. You also captured Silver's character perfectly.

I like the fact that you used second person :D

It was in character too, sweet :3

Silver! :D He's one of my favorite characters.

This fic is so awesome and Soulsilvershipping is too!

I liked it a lot! You portrayed Silver's maturing in a very interesting way. Thanks for sharing!

I enjoyed the prose. :)

Oh, wow, that was awesome! Hmmm, I never thought Jack-the-kind-of-Jackass could be so-nice! It's not natural, but natural or not I like him the way he is now.

All I can say is fantastic. I've read a lot of your pokemon stories and I find them all enjoyable to read!

KHue~

Can't tell you how much I love this.

Hope you don't mind my running to read your other stories whilst bored. Nice distraction, they are.

Now, this here just got me into Silver/Lyra. Seriously. It's an epic piece, beautifully written, hope to see more of these two in particular-though all of yours are awesome~.

Aw. Cute. :" Great job!

Love it.

Oh, I daresay this is the best Soulsilver fic around here :D Amazingly in character (quite a feat with someone like Silver) and very nicely written.

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You did not give your name out to complete idiots, you did not even give your name out to friends – well, if you had friends, that was.
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Hah :D

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You shouldn't have been careless with your trainer card.
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Total win, this and the following paragraph. Only a bit confused as to why Silver would go to the Lake of Rage and Kotone would also be there? Or is this just non-game?

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And you remembered how you were once treated in the exact same way – striving and failing and being put down by Him.
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Ohh. Oh, I love your for mentioning Giovanni. Just, really.

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Perhaps this would work out to be a better method to get her off your back.

"Silver –!"
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:D

Definitely going into my favourites. Except that I'm afraid that by now you make up half of them? :D

~Snoaz

What first got me clicking this story was actually not your summary, but the amount of reviews it's gotten for one chapter! I had to see for myself what was so intriguing that made these many people (currently at 21 reviews -excluding myself) actually reviewed. And now look, I'm one of them.

I love your description of Silver's perspective; how you kept him in character the whole time which so many struggle to do with a deep character like Silver (he's actually my favourite rival ever. He's got the most interesting story) had just completely made my day. I would love to chose which one I enjoyed reading the most, but heck I loved them all, so I'm just going to go with the last one that brought out the pathetically sad fangirl in me. I could never imagine their first kiss with Lyra just catching him by surprise -I'd always thought he'd be the one to make the first move- so I'm glad I finally found a story like that.

Very nice.

You know, in my old 6th grade language arts class, the teachers had said that we wouldn't come across second person books because they would all be "how-to" books or guide/walk-through books, and that we wouldn't have any need to read those kinds of books until 8th grade. While I proved her wrong by, again, finding a story on the anime Kuroshitsuji in second person, and I just found yours, a even better story that is in second person.

Erin H./J-Pop-addict

PS: The kiss at the end made the fangirl in me super excited lol.