So when Alex and Mel are arguing over whose little tube it is, Iggy should have taken it and said 'it is MINE'

Love this story! But I don't want max to die!

love it i always wanted to know what their future would be like

screamed? again? maybe screamed "no" but, seriously. not every cliffhanger needs to end in a scream. a scream is not the one situation fits all answer when you need drama.

wow. she screamed. was it like she screamed from shock or something accually happened? because if it was from shock, a gasp would make sence or maybe shocked silence, but theres no way that could make someone scream. even fainting would be over dramatic.

ok. im done trolling. i do really like the story. its interesting and i like how you can hear other peoples point of view. good job.

THAT WAS TOTALLY AMAZING BUT YD U HAVE 2 STOP IT WAS LIKE THE BEST STOY EVA IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD IT WAS SO AMAZING AND I WANTED 2 READ MORE AND I LOVED IT WAND YEAH WELL U GET THE IDEA!

this was your first fanfic this was .y first favorite great story by the way

FangMax Alexandra Maximum Ride (blonde, dark eyes, pale skin, witty) Skylar Valencia Ride ( Cheery, strong, dark hair, cocoa eyes) Blade Fang Ride (dark hair, dark eyes, pale skin, obnoxious) Airon Jeb Ride ( Quiet, tough, blonde) Samantha Brigid Ride ( blonde, loud, sweet)

IggyElla Melody Ella Martinez( blonde-red hair, brown eyes,) Vans Ignatius Martinez(dark hair, brown eyes, blue streaks in hair, ) Harmony Monica Martinez(pyro, dark hair, blue eyes)

GazzySophia Daniels( redhead with green eyes and rose skin)- Radley Gazzy Daniels (redhead, gray eyes, freckles), Rosalie Sophia Daniels ( dark red hair, green eyes,rose skin), Rover Ignite Daniels and Raven Angel Daniels (both blonde with light green eyes and pallid skin), Rector Radley Daniels( adopted, caramel hair, grey eyes, grandson, Radley dead) Ruben Gazzy Daniels (adopted, Rector's brother, redhead, green eyes)

NudgeNathan Neil ( black skin) Nicolette Nudge Neil ( brown eyes, wavy hair) , Nadia Crystal Neil, Nina Monique Neil, Nova Maximum Neil

AngelQuincy Duke Abner( tall, caramel haired, sweet)- Taylor Quincy Abner, Celestia Angelique Abner (blonde multi colored eye) Francesca Eleanora Abner(blonde,blue eyes), Duke Kingsley Abner ( caramel haired, brown eyed)Aliana Evana Abner( blonde, black eyed) Belinda Vienna Abner ( died at birth, blonde, short, black eyed) ,

Isidora Sarilee Abner(blue eyed, caramel haired),

Duke Kingsley Abner married Skylar Ride

Celestia Abner married Vans Martinez

Harmony Martinex married Blade Ride

Nadia Neil married Airon Ride

Radley Daniels married Alexandra Ride

Rover Daniels married Nova Neil

Gazzy Sophia

6 FREAKIN KIDS! Man max n fang got

REALLY busy...

This story seems very familiar... and so does that name...wait a second...Elizem17?

PLEASE DO A SEQUEL, IF YOU HAVE THE IDEA ALREADY, DO A SEQUEL. I NEED TO READ MORE! PLEASE! PLEASE! ONE SEQUEL AND I'LL BE HAPPY!

I loved the story, a sequel would be epic but, alas, i have no ideas... Anyways, amazing story, great characters, you are a great writer! keep writing, anything.

SUSPENCE

i know that oc means own character. But i don't know what OCC means please explain.

TTTT this was sooooooooo prettiiiifulllllll it was a reallllyyyy good story and ur a really good writer lolz good job!