i love it.

My goshz, this was so nice to read!

Awwwwwwwww so sweeet

Ummmmm... I don't mean to be rude, but Arthur is totally OOC in this scene. He would never treat Merlin like that, even if that other servant was literally undressing him in front of Arthur. Also, your descriptions of what was going on in Arthur's mind are making the entire story completely hard to understand. I myself barely figured out what was going on three quarters of the way through. I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but this work needs critiquing.

Cute!

Nice

Loved it!

Teeheeehee not utter crap at all! Lovely and sweet and jealous arthur is everything!

i love it so much and so i thank you

Merlin's neckerchief! I am bursting of laughter! ROFL! "The stable boy is kinda attractive."? I loved that line! And when the servant went missing, I wonder what happened to him. I am soooo sure not even Arthur knows. He is so innocent.

I love this :D You captured Merlin really well, proper description and mannerisms and dialogue!

Honestly, it's not utter crap! It's actually really cute and fluffy!
*goes cuddle rabbits out of pure fluff overload*

This is far from being crap! It's all rough love and passion yet soft and tender fic if I do say so myself!

I name him Frud.

It's anything but utter crap, it's beautiful in a way