Naruto is still loud and retarted. Now just in an abusive relationship with the pink fangirl menace.

It was actually Senju Tobirama, the Nidaime Hokage, that created Kuchiyose: Edo Tensei... It is one of the kinjutsu written down in the Forbidden Scroll...

Kakashi asking a woman who in his own words looks like his sensei’s wife?

Didn’t Naruto have control of the foxes chakra at this point in the Naruto verse? Also he had sage mode, right?

Grabbing by the ear and slapping is getting ridiculous, also he can’t walk around a bit but can use Bunshin to run all around, didn’t really make sense.

Naruto can't loose control, at your age of Nineteen he has already mastered Kurama's chakra.

But my issue on the Kyuubi is different.

I take back what I said on my issue with his mom... I just got to that part.

Another thing I don't like. He's Nineteen, he already has control over the Kyuubi's chakra. And he already knows about his mother too. Either you never watched the anime or was the manga, or you're an idiot.

It's good so far, I'll giving that. There are only three things I don't like so far. One, Shepard's coddling on Naruto. He's what, twenty or somewhere colse? He isn't a damn kid. Two, he doesn't need a gun to protect himself with. Three, armor would only slow him down as it is too bully for someone like him. It would get in the way and hinder his movements. He needs to stay light so he can move fast and stay agial. Armor that is similar to Shepard's would endanger him and those around him. And the Kyuubi's chakra can act as a better shield for him than any armor.

You fucked up the plot in chapter 9. In chapter 8 Naruto had absolutely no control over kyuubi's chakra then in this chapter you said he mastered it? Wtf? I will admit that because any and all chances of Talk getting with Naruto are over I've officially lost interest in this fic. You showed a dedication to this fic in the beginning that is rare in authors. But after this back and forth crap with Naruto spontaneously getting control over kyuubi's chakra when he had none at the beginning of this fic with no plausible explanation for it, it shows a severe lack of dedication. You rushed it, plain and simple. Where you could have gone back, and rewrote what you had to fit in the increased control of kyuubi's chakra you didn't. Hell, you would have been better off leaving it as it was with him not having control and no one would have thought less of you for it. I even ignored how lazy you got with Tail's trial and how her fellow Quarians went about giving their support. But if this is what's written in future chapters I'd rather not read it.

Now onto the matter of Naruto and Tali, I'll admit I got my hopes up throughout most of the first half of the fic that the two would get together. If your lack of dedication to the fic hadn't already caused my interest in this fic to take a downward spiral then what you did with them would have done it. You dropped every possible hint at the two getting together from the moment they met. Even going so far as to state how Talk truly felt about Naruto in the 3rd person. But then you contradicted everything you built up to that moment after every Natural/Tali fan was about to get up from whatever they were sitting on a whoop with joy with 7 words. "I always wanted a little brother." Really? If she wanted to give her own thanks a kiss on the cheek would have been better. Not as symbolic as a kiss on the lips. I don't know what you were thinking with that scene but I didn't like it. This has just solidified my decision to stop reading period.

Rewrite this fic with that same dedication you had at the beginning or give this fic to someone who will do it justice. Because despite the mistakes there is still hope for the story, just not this story.

Great story I really liked it a lot I enjoyed the plot and liked the lack of character bashing in the story I also enjoyed the pairings in the story all in all good job.

As i say to a lot of others... fi you wwana make fighting sides even, then dont downgrade strong ones (ninja) ... just upgrade weak one (geth)... thatwould be MUCH MORE GOOD!

This story is enjoyable but has not aged well. People who enjoy the canon Naruto lore like myself may find the AU more and more abrasive with each chapter.

Oh my gosh so funny triple ganged by Shepard sakura and tsunade classic XD