oh and one more thing
so if Harry ever reveals his powers but not his actual back story you can use this one I thought was good and believable. something like his parents died when he was one (some real stuff because Harry can't think fastly enough to create all lies) his relative took him in, kicked him out at 4 or 6 or whatever age you think is plausible,because of his powers he probably kept breaking and moving and doing stuff 24/7 with no control,, he was homeless but found ghost, and old ancient one took intrest in him and though him many thingsit will make up for his knowledge, like one ghost can be an old expert astronmist, some ancient times philosopher or some shit, latin people, you know that sort)
It was just an idea I had I thought it made sense and all
oh and if you want more inside on esper powers and physics or just love psi stories you'll love saiki kusou
or the disastrous life of saiki k, its an anime about a phycic trying to live peacefully as possible with his powers only being a nuisance to him, mob psycho 100 also a good esp anime.

fucking adore this piece of shit. like I'm so disappointed that there isn't more chapters. like gawd man, aughh I would have stayed up all night and morning for this shit. it's like a stand alone from both series. ahhhh I want, no I need more. I'll be rereading this in a few months and I dare it not to have more chapter.
it's fine though if you don't want to author-sama, I do this want to put pressure on you or anything just trying to express how much I love this work, thanks.

Oh wow it's been 6 years since i last read this and it's as good as i remember! WIsh there's more but hope you're happy with whatever you're doing now and thanks for sharing this fic (and the others esp Effloresco Secundus :)) 3

Please update soon

Eh, while it was short enough for me to bother to keep reading, I must say the whole ESP side of things is by far the weakest part of your story. To me it feels like pure detrimentyour story wouod have been better in my mind if he didn't have any supernatural powers. Even then, adding them in us one thing but making every single one he gets essentially crippling?
It's like you're writing two seperate stories and mashing them into one haphazardly.

Okay what was the idea behind slamming him with as many extremely debilitating "abilities" as you could and completely fucking with his head? Harry is a bloody mental case between the empathy and the water scrying, loss of control sends items flying with TK. He has his eidetic memory and that's nice I guessthe muscle memory is a lie, he never got that or L wouldn't have seen him acting like he thought his arms and legs should be longer.
Is this just another shit on Harry story?

Harry, for all you claim he is a genius, really isn't. If Mello keeps redirecting the conversation back to what he is dodging, just shut up and stare at him. It's not like Harry has to say anything, just stop talking.
And other than the blank face you claim he has, he doesn't control his expressions whatsoever in any way. Also, what is with the extremely submissive body language? Harry grew up and had years where he wasn't the little kid at the Dursley's, all this curling in on himself and looking at the ground etc. is pathetic and out of nowhere. Just because you put him in a kid's body again doesn't magically regress him emotional state to when he was that age

It's annoying that you're writing Harry with absolutely no control over himself . . . jumping and tensing and twitching and freaking the fuck out at everything.

I love this

Abandoned?

Love the story! It's a 10/10 for me.

This story is extremely interesting, I really wish there was more.

I love love love this story. It's one of those stories I wish I could wipe my mind of so I can reread it... One day I hope to be able to write something like this, up to this standard with as interesting of a concept. I love the way you write Harry, even if he is OOC, because this is FANFICTION, and if you can't write your characters out of character then that seems like an awfully boring fandom to frequent. Keep going, if you can, I'd love to see even just one more chapter of this story. Anyway xD I'll stop embarrassing myself by being a dweeeb.

Oooooooo how interesting! Sad to see it seems to be abandoned, but I'm glad that I stumbled across it!
Thanks for writing and posting :)

Harry's character is so inconsistent and OOC throughout this story! I'm very disappointed. It's like you tried to merge two different characters into one and kept changing your mind about who you preferred. So frustrating.