Absolutely LOVELY!

Though I don't think it really needs the last line :)

Wonderful )I wonder what that way to keep warmth Gann spoke of was ) I hope they be happy )

I found it to be rather lovely. Your efforts defiantly weren't wasted. :)

Beautiful, heart warming and poignant. Great work!

very good and creative, ive not really played nwn much but this has made me want to get more into it, i love how you describe things in it like smells etc

That was absoloutely amasing! U must MUST keep writing more! u have a real flare for writing so keep it up! :D... put me in a romantic mood now ;)... def keep up the writing

damn girl you write better than i do

Perfect story Whiteshade )It has a very nice flow to it and I feel like I get sucked in to it and needed to keep reading. You also keep a nice mix of a serious tone when its fitting and a more joking tone to lighten things up at the end to keep it from feeling to heavy.

I cant really come up with anything you should change it has your personal touch and feels like a fitting length. Nothing about your choice of words that I don’t feel fits or anything like that.

All in all a great story you got both thumbs up from me and I like to read more soon )

Good job! I'm glad you decided to share this :)