i love the last two sentences!

That was great, thanks.

Wow. This was very well done.

SEQUEL THERE NEEDS TO BE A SEQUEL

I think my favorite part of this story was the last two sentences. It seemed the PERFECT way to sum everything up.

I think you did a good job keeping both of them in character. The whole situation (him returning to the school secretly) seemed to be something he would do and I was very impressed with the way everything was handled. I also liked how the ending was very ambiguous, so that I could put my own spin on everything. Did he stay? Did he leave? What did they do after this event? I love the mystery.

Aw, that's so cute. And well written. Keep going if there's more, please.

*Finz*

O I like it there anymore?