You should do one on LIse nd peter enmgeamnt party night

she almost has the sAME NAME AS ME.

This was amazing, not perfect, but close to it, I think that Lois Lowry would love this idea for a 18th chapter, thank you so much for making this!

it's quite okay.

good job.

-icy-

Good, but work on paragraphs? It's hard to read.

Do something like this: (just made this up)

"Hey!" Annemarie laughed. "What's up?"

"Nothing much," Mama said.

Kristi laughed. "Hello Annemarie"