Love ti! Adorable. Thnks

Love it, the bar fight was written very well and I really liked the ending

Good work on the Fanfic. It was brilliant

Amazing writing! Powerful story.

This was awesome, so touching and amazing descriptions. You did a wonderful job narrating the feelings and the understanding of eachother. I know I make no sense but I hope you get what I said. In short. Wonderful job!

I think you just got the characters.

I like the amount of detail you used. Not too much, but not too little. The ending was good as well. Nice job

AW. Nice fight scene. I love how everyone just watches these two go at it. Me thinks they might have known the drill. Or perhaps not. The ending is perfect. I feel so bad for Murph when he puts his hand through the window. I love these guys, and you captured them perfectly.

This story was so touching!

You're a very talented writer and I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the fleeting glimpse of insight you gave of the twins. I love how they know each other so well and can easily communicate through a simple touch. I felt so bad for Murphy and I found myself feeling grateful that he has Connor to be there for him. It makes me wish I had someone with whom I could share such an intense bond. Truely, this was a wonderful read. The ending almost had me tearing up a little. Amazing job!

Oh wow! This is absolutely amazing! I can't believe it took me so long to find this gem! Brilliant work! I love the way you emphasis the twins differences and how those differences help them interact with each other. Not to mention the end was just cute! Great job!

*sniffle* That was a great ending. I love your work! I feel that you've got their connection down really well, and it's a delight to read. Keep up the good work!

~ml

Oh the McManus brothers... I really enjoyed this. It's nice to see a bit written about their time in Ireland and their emotional coping. Plus Murph is my favorite of the twins, so I particularly enjoyed this.

All in all, great!

- Diane Langley