Wow.
This was amazing. :)

"What facility he has with minds is negligible, to say the least; even his own is unruly and wanders where it will. His mind has a mind of its own." And a fine fine Hatter-voice it is, too. Tangled, poetic, rattle-clack writing: it fits him like a cap and is a pleasure to read.

Ah... It is nice. I like how it's very subtly, delightfully Alice/Hatter. You don't throw in all the OMG-I-Love-You!s like the others.

This is more of a non-review... a notation that I AM reading these and that you can expect more regarding them when I can catch you out. :D

NICE STORY CONTINUE PLEASE! where did you get the original screenplay for alice in wonderland? can you send me the link please? :DD

I absolutely love your Hatter voice. It's brilliant. And I love that you decided to write about this particular part of the film; it doesn't get touched on much.

Also, might I ask where you found the first draft of the script? I just can't NOT read it after reading what you said about it.

Oh i do love the way you seem to... Sculpt phrases. I like how you've got him far darker thank he may otherwise be, but i think it fits the situation. He's so... dark in that scene, and you've caught it so well. I love the paragraph about "A dressmaker's pattern for the ears, the mind, the heart." It's brilliantly woven, and a fantastic little fic in itself. Not the first fic i've read by you, and i certainly hope it's not the last either -

Oh wow! I like this :D So well written :D

This is really well written! Well done! :) I loved it, it was amazing! Keep up these awesome Mad Hatter/Alice stories :)

Wonderfully written. I think you've got the Hatter down to a T.

And where did you find this screenplay? I must know!

Another great Alice story! Very well done. I hope you do more.

This is absolutely amazing! I love your Hatter- he's beautifully off, but still completely there. :) Great job

On another note- where did you find the first draft of the screenplay? I've been looking for it but can't seem to find it.

i'm so amazed, i'm actually out of words!

so loverly written! your writing skills are too awesome! 8)

This is absolutely lovely. You captured Hatter's voice, and I've wondered what was going on in his mind in that moment a lot. Well done you!

Could you possibly point me in the direction of said first draft? I'm dying to read it. :)

That asked, this was a lovely little oneshot!