you might want to work on your grammar a bit. other than that it was good. not a fan of zexion, LOVE Marluxia.

love it. mostly because I LOVE lord Marluxia of castle oblivion!

I love Marluxia in a different way! It was funny.

Very funny. I love it!

Me luvs Marluxia and Zexion too theyre awsome! Me really liked this story i wish ther wer more stories with this couple *sigh* oh well anyways thx for the great story ur awesome! ＼(O)／

That was funny as hell XD Oh my god I thought Zexion was a Prude... guess not O.O

OMG super cute storey i LOVE KH couples, these two are one of my faves so cute) you did this storey so well, i think i exsploded into rainbows. P.S i cant belive you dont like Demyx O.O he is my FAVE!

HA ... ha this is awsome *chuckles* Larxene got what she deserved, no yaoi for her. nice one-shot