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Vheeri The Succubus chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 There really is a god... |
red eagle chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 I think we've just been rick-rolled. Gimme my 30 seconds back. |
Terribly Sharp chapter 1 . 5/7/2010 I believe that Invalid Pickle is actually MrsSonnyBlack, as this story is nothing special in my opinion. And evidently everyone else thought so too. |
Invalid Pickle chapter 1 . 4/28/2010 This is perhaps the greatest story I have ever read in my entire life. The writing style is unique and to the point, and the flow is smooth and the story is spot on. I especially like the use of the words "ping" and "pong," it really helps set the mood for the rest of the story. You should definitely consider writing a sequel, especially how much of a cliff hanger you leave us with. Spelling and grammar were perfect; a real rarity on this site. I honestly can't begin to tell you how absolutely perfect this story is. Seriously, it's the most fantastically writing piece of work ever. It could rival Shakespeare. You should definitely consider getting a publishing contract for this phenomenal art. You should think about writing a fan story for Tetris as well; I know you'd make a masterpiece. |
gredftjgfke chapter 1 . 4/9/2010 um is that it |
Chad Simon chapter 1 . 4/2/2010 Funny. Well written. |