| Reviews for On Matters of Trust |
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   IsolationQueen42 chapter 7 . 6/23 I am so confused but i love it |
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 7 . 10/9/2019 I was so worried before... But I get something wonderful in the end! The whole Arthur saw Merlin's memories... The Castle was Alive to win the War! Merlin is Alive because Arthur order/want him to be there with him Alive! I Love it! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/19/2019 Am I the only one struggling to follow this story? It written in a very confusing manner. I have no idea what is going on half of the time. |
| Murasaki Hina chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 I am uncomfortable from the get go because you used the word Britain instead of Albion. That should really really be fixed. Please. |
| Jasmine-N-Leaves chapter 3 . 12/30/2018 Loved rhis story. Well Done! |
| Andreas chapter 5 . 11/6/2018 The story by itself was kind of intresting. But I can not follow or understand what happening. The way you have built your sentences and how you have divided up your text is really fustrating me. Most of the time it is not clear where characters are and sometimes it is impossible to tell which character who is refered to. Your use of ( , ) is also confusing. I apologize but I really tried to read this bit I have no idea whats happening. |
| Irina Hunter chapter 1 . 9/18/2018 Who are the first two magic users that the note mentions? |
| ninagayler chapter 7 . 7/23/2017 Original and moving |
| Teeshadii chapter 7 . 7/8/2017 I have no words. That was beautiful |
| Crystalzap chapter 7 . 6/2/2017 great story! Really glad MErlin was brought back. It just wouldn't be the same without him |
| oma13 chapter 7 . 5/2/2017 Beautiful, beautiful story! But I was disappointed that you ended it there. How does Arthur explain to everyone, especially Uther, all that has happened? And I was so looking forward to Gaius' and Gwen's reactions when learning Merlin was alive...and explaining that! Great story, though. |
| LongPastMidnight chapter 7 . 3/5/2017 brilliant! |
| karameiwaku chapter 7 . 1/20/2017 Ah, lovely story. Merlin can refuse Arthur nothing. Their banter was so much fun! "You won't even let me die in peace" - awesome line! I can almost hear the update to my favorite Merlinism - "I'm happy to serve you until the day I die... again, and again because you'll just keep bringing me back." |
| Isilme.7 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017 I absolutly enjoyed reading this story. The way you used color, sound and light was well done. I enjoyed specially some images, like the one explaining how Merlin is like a deep ocean hard to see because of the bright surface. That one and some others. I hope some day you write another story for Merlin. Thanks again and good luck with your writing, whatever it is you are doing with it now! |
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 7 . 10/25/2016 Cool work around the death bit, I liked their reactions too, it was very in character |
