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aprilanddecember chapter 1 . 6/30 Nice! You did an excellent job keeping everyone in character. |
Puncake chapter 1 . 12/17/2017 Omg I love this...please carry it on! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2017 Loved it :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 Do you like this pairing?You always make the endings sad or anti sasusaku |
Deadpool chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 I love this! Very well written. Everyone seemed in character, especially Sasuke. People tend to romanticize him and his actions, so I'm glad you kept him IC. And I love Sakura in this fic! I wish we saw more of this side of her in the anime. You've taken her character and perfected it, so splendid job! |
virlizzlex chapter 1 . 4/18/2015 its really good and unexpected :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 I really liked that :D |
pruplup4 chapter 1 . 1/5/2015 I know it's been a long time since this was posted, but I might as well. If I reviewed everything of yours I've read that'd be pretty much everything you wrote, and it would be a long unintelligible rant of fangirling, so I'll cut to the chase. One: I love your characterizations of Sakura and Sasuke, here and everywhere. Especially in this, their relationship is so tentative, exactly what I imagined sasuke's homecoming to be before canon blew a hole in that (but let's be real, canon rarely does much else). Sakura is so strong and self assured - an enhanced version of canon Sakura. I dislike Sakura generally but mostly because she has such potential, and like always, you develop her potential to become a kickass tree destroyer here. Thank you. Sasuke is perfect in all his weird mixed feeling self too. No words, really. Two: the kind of bittersweet ambiguity, I think, is what you do best. It's wonderfully done here, especially. The struggle Sakura has isn't fully, nearly solved at the end: just enough so that it's not a thread left unraveling, but not enough so you have nothing left to ponder. Perfect. That's a hard balance to get at. Man. So good. You should just do a massive revamp of the manga with a BAMF Sakura. OH. Kakashi, being my favorite character of all time anywhere everywhere, I loved his mentions in this. I just love him. I've loved him since I was a wee child of four gazing up on the sacred television screen and saw a masked man with his porn. Sorry, sorry, I'll stop. But this. Keep doing this. |
Fall In Perfection chapter 1 . 7/3/2014 This is cute but practical. Translation: it defines the very essence of Sakura and Sasuke 3 |
mistyblues chapter 1 . 5/21/2014 YES, I love it when Sakura is the star. And I don't mean like a heroine, but more like a stronger person who is able contribute to the missions. I find it terribly annoying how lots of stories still portray her as a typical damsel-in-distress despite her transformation in Shippuden and powerful training under Tsunade. So thanks for forgoing the usual and writing her the way she actually IS now. :D The ending was kinda vague but I liked it. It seemed fitting considering that Sasuke isn't one to ever rush into things like love. Probably might take years for them to get together, but I liked how it ended on a note that seemed to say, 'this is the start of something.' Kudos! |
mikomiarisu-chan chapter 1 . 5/11/2013 one of the most awesome story ever! i just love kicking-ass sakura! bravo! |
ice-cream-iguana chapter 1 . 12/31/2012 I adore this. |
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 7/20/2012 Lovely story! :D |
powerofmicrofibre chapter 1 . 12/30/2011 AWWWWW! |
therentyoupay chapter 1 . 8/30/2011 Loved it! And yes, I totally listen to your song recommendations! |