That was... amazingly well done! O.O I really felt their connection, and that slow build up from them not knowing each other and then meeting, becoming teammates, then friends... eventually lovers: the transitions were beautifully done! :D

Beautiful

how was this so beautiful like uh

It’s always fun to see writing in which intimacy is conveyed through touch, eye contact, etc. other than speech. That said, the ending dialogue was perfect.

awwww

seriously, w o w

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this is incredible~!

Really good! This story is very well written, executed wonderfully. It's kinda corny though, omf. I don't think Tenten or Neji are that dramatic about everything.

Really great fanfic! Love it love it love it! Please keep up the good work! XD

I love how emotionally intimate this is.

Love this :) The best stories are those that can actually become a part of the real series. Thank you for this!

I loved this fanfic, it's definitely the best i've read so far! I usually never post any reviews, but i just had to this time, because it's just that good. I think it's one of the few with correct grammar and spelling, and i am in awe at the way you can arrange words so perfectly to create an impact. You can really paint a picture! I can't really say much else, except that this is extremely well written, and i just had to post this review about it. Keep up the good work :)

Awsome story! I loved it

This story is breathtaking. Im very impress on how you managed to piece them all together in one chapter. Stay amazing