I don't typically read fics with a lot of prominent OCs but I quite enjoyed this one. I loved that Edith and Mally were so close, shedding some much needed lightning those characters. I also loved the boat moment between Alice and Tarrant!

Absolutely wonderful!

ASDFGHJKL I FINALLY FINISHED THIS HOLY SHMOWZOW.

This story is so amazing, I nearly cried multiple times. I love how you portrayed Mally and Hatter. And Pig is so adorable.

Wow.
That was really, quite practically brilliant. Positively insightful into the nature of characters and the characters of humans.
You must be utterly mad.

Oh, very well done. Bravo.

This is the most brilliant story ever :D I sat here for 3 hours reading this from top to bottom, and have felt such a range of emotions reading it. Absolutely loved it - thank you so much for sharing :)

the demon barber beetlejuice and a ton of others the headless horseman i think james and the giant peach the rhino and more

you are amazing. i cant even

It is so absolutely, indescribably wonderful to find a story that is enthralling and unique and new and so terribly well written that it almost hurts to finish it.

Thank you for writing such a story.

Oh..My...Gosh! It's so...too...it's...eppppppp!

I love it-It's going into my list of 'My top ten favourite stories on FanFiction'

:D. I always knew Hatter and Alice had to be together!

What a sweet, wonderful story!

I loved Edith and Pig, and the story as a whole developed very well. You managed to convey a lot of action without getting bogged down in the details, both during the "action" sequences and in the Otherland scenes with Margaret and Alice's mother. I really enjoyed this story.

One nitpick - in the beginning of Chapter 17, you said Edith had a lot of uplekuchen, and I think you meant pishsalver (if she's supposed to be Mally's size). Oh, I loved the friendship between these two. I do think my favorite scene was Mally's childhood home, as bittersweet as that was. All the little details just built up that warm, comfortable and sweet nostalgia before you quickly and violently dashed it to pieces - beautifully done!

Thank you for this wonderful story, and for sticking with it to the end!

Fy Cymraeg yn ofnadwy.

Beautiful language. Pity I can't pronounce a word of it.

'Not that way!' it barked at him for the tenth time. 'Are you an idiot, man? You'll never find her if you go that way!'

LITERAL LOLSNORT.

'The point still stands: One cannot buy a carriage with cookies!'

'Well, one cannot pay for cookies with ham!'

'Why was there ham in my pocket?'

The CMOA of an increasingly huggle-worthy sequence. Well done.

'Can you teach to fight?'

I think a word ran away. Either that or I've gone insane. Again.

I approve quite impressively, m'dear.

Tarrant

-misread that as Tennant- -again-

Dun dun DUUUUN!1

-hugs you and the fic and you-

Dun dun DUUN! Yes, this is me finally getting around to continuing. Sorry about that. D: D: D: -hug of epic apology-

This is one of the best fics I have ever read. The Mad Hatter is so in character! It's hard to pull of the rambling he does when he's angry, but you succeed amazingly.

Edith is the right mix of likable and unlikable and Alice is great!

This fic had so much background to it.

Amazing job!