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I don't know what to say other than that was really well-written.

Feeling the need/desire to re-read your 'moments' tonight - you can probably guess why XD. Have and always will adore and prefer your 'voice' for both of them. xo

I seriously hope that you have considered a career in writing! This is just another proof that you have all it takes to make it into something awesome, and even though Fanfiction doesn't exactly open doors, I can only imagine what you could do with an original story!

You have caught the intensity, the agony and the horror of the nightmare so amazingly well, and the way Leon was there to comfort Cloud was just perfect and so heartwarming! Their mutual love and understanding is so profound and deep, and the way Leon instinctively knows what Cloud needs is so moving and right!

I love your writing, all of it. I don't think I have read a single piece that I didn't love to death! Stay amazing, honey! You brightens a cloudy day anytime!

Gaasp. Oi, how you made me worry for Cloud. I knew from the beginning that it was a dream, but I worried for poor Cloud who did not know. And then all the worry went away with Leon. You're good at that, you know? Evoking emotions from your readers. Well, at least from me. :P

Such a painful dream I am glad ELon woke him to something better.

*shakes finger* Don't scare me! Yes. This may be a cliche concept, especially with Cloud Strife, but you still had me tearing up with his first sight of Leon. Inspiring, as always.

Took a look at the Kink Meme. There's still a bunch of good prompts up for grabs. *nudge, nudge, wink* Can't wait to read more!

This is a rather cliche concept, but I rarely see fics depicturing Cloud's nightmares after Sephiroth is gone. That gave it a nice little twist. I also love the ending, it really shows that their relationship doesn't need complicated dialogue or gestures. Great job, once again :)

Absolutely wonderful job on expressing the utter terror of Cloud's nightmare! I also loved the way you had Leon comfort him afterward. ;)

Cool~!

ARGH

you already know how much I love you

this was amazing ;3;

... I would literally PAY you to write a multi-chapter XD

I haven't had the fortune yet of stumbling across this on the Kink Meme! Hard to keep up. ;D

That said, I really really like this. You can almost feel the emotion dripping off of Cloud, and then Leon, and then-! -incoherent fangirling-

Great job. 3