A good start. L like it and wait for the next.

The best rory and Luke story I have read!

GOD I WOULD ADORE A SEQUEL! :) Maybe with them keeping their thing a secret for awhile and then...IDK but you'd make it awesome! This story is one of my favorite GG ones on here!

And I read your profile while looking to see if you'd written or started a sequel to this...very sorry for your grandfather and grandmother. :(

love it

Would LOVE a sequel. :) I love your stories; simply fantastic.

AWESOME!

loved this story, hope there is a squeal, keep up the great work

wonderful, wishing the setting was while she was at yale...

please write more rory/luke!

I'm so happy you finished it. Sorry it took so long to finally review it. I love that you really stuck to the story line as close as possible. And Luke in jail was perfect for this. Great story and I can't wait for the sequel.

Hi, I'm glad you announced your decision to postpone your work on this story and maybe continue with a sequel. And while this L/R-story is something very special in the GG-world I can imagine it needs some time to prepare a good storyline to continue (if you will come back someday). Even more while I think they just have to face some important issues and a lot of people will observe them suspiciously or even won’t like them to be a couple. After all Luke is still married. It might be very interesting to see how they will handle their situation but also it might be more difficult to tell this part of their story. Don’t matter what you will do, I’ll keep an eye out of it.

I know I gave a very short comment to the last chapter of your story. So I like to ad something. I liked several of your ideas. First to mention: how you managed to lead them both to the lake of course. That was my favourite. And the dream-sequences were good too, Rory’s even awesome. It was exiting to see how their recent encounter stirred up their careful oppressed emotions for each other again.

While Rory mused about one-night-stands in the previous chapter, I was a little bit surprised she was about to tell him she’s still a virgin. At the first moment I thought she would remind him she had not taken care of contraception. And because that’s just an annoying issue to deal with at this point of the story I would have left it to the one-night-stands-version which would have implied they were safe. Anyway she could have been very nervous, impatient or even clumsy with someone she MAKES LOVE WITH for the first time and not just having sex for fun. It’s not really a big deal but I think it’s important for this story so far to keep Luke from any suspicion of irresponsibility. (Just my opinion)

I hope I will see you again with a new L/R-story.

Meanwhile: Thanks for sharing this one.

A sequel? Sounds interesting and I'll keep an eye out for it if and when you post it. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Thank you for writing it and I wish you luck with your future endevours.

Sincerely,

Miguel

really interesting couple luke/rory. definitely liked how you set the story up. i think you should continue.

PLEASE CONTINUE WITH MORE ON THEIR RELATIONSHIP AND HOW THEIR FAMILY AND FRIENDS REACT

good chapter & more please

good chapter