This is a great story. The characters really show their personalities.

oh this looks like it might get good. more chapters please

sweet.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

keep going

this story is disgusting. absolutely horrific and incredibly sappy. please write a sentence with more than five words on it, please? this is absolutely appalling.

Is it just me or is this extremely akin to ginnygirl2009's fic 'the soulbond of harry and Hermione'?

However, you did many things better in this than that one. (Even if they mirror each other. This fic also mirrors a couple others too...)

My first thought with this was that 'meh, the author redid the chappie.'

Still, there is a huge amount of room for improvement (even in the cliche environment of this fic)

This feels like a rough draft that no one looked through again.

You made Snape act more in character than a lot of the fics like this but Draco is suddenly a 'good guy'? Impossible. He'd have to change...slowly.

Sadly, this fic has a lot of work that needs to be done with it. (Grammar,spelling, sentence variety, etc in just the writing skills; not even listing plot cementing.)

My biggest word of advice? kill off the cliche's.

This would be a fantastic parody piece though...It really nails the cliches and such. .

I have a fear of flames so I really dont want to do this but it must be done I love your story but it seems very mary-sue ish I guess by meaning all happy and smiley and over looking facts like Slytherins would drop their friendship to Draco in a snap if he was hanging out with a muggleborn and a half-blood Harry Potter of all people through your bashing and evil treeting of Ron saved this story for me cause I despise him lol again sorry for the bad mouth I really am

great so far update soon

Good Story

Update Soon

Okay, kinda rushed and almost paody like but I like it.