Is it Gen. Raines? I think its the gen. It is him, isn't it? ...I sound like Wade Wilson... Oooh! Can Wade make a cameo appearance? Pretty please? I'd love to see John's reaction to the Merc wih a Mouth! XD ...That is the down side of having ADD and a random mind/fast thought process... you end up going off on tangents. XP

I loved this story, and am gonna go read the sequal as soon as I can! I'm looking forward to seeing how this series turns out! I will review the newest chapter in the sequal, so look for me! 8D

umm...? Mistique doesn't have a scent...?

i'll ignore it for the stories purpose, but just thought i'd let you know. :)

very nice job on this -

very nice can't wait for the next one XD

can't wait to read the next chapter

Keep up the good work

Oh, ok, thanks for clearing that up, but it would be interesting if some characters had extra powers, just my opinion though. Good Luck with your story.

Keep up the good work -

Question, are you going to just be changing the characters abilities a little, or are you going to be giving them new powers. Ether way I think it could work. Good Luck and please update soon.

Hey. Congrats on the 1st story. I recently discovered this site and am soon to write my 1st as well(hopefully) and really enjoy the direction yours is going in. Looks like a good backround will be coming soon. I also like the interaction with others he seems to have. One question. Was nightcrawler a world-famous acrobat? or was John just able to see/hear of him before?

All in all, keep up the good work.