Thanks for the very good read

It's even better when you read this again.

I read this about two years ago, and loved it. I'm not sure why I didn't review it, at the time I was new to fanfiction and didn't realise how it worked. But recently I remembered this story, and had to go looking for it. It took me the bones of three hours but eventually, I found it. I have to say, it is one of the most evocative fanfictions I've ever read. It's an idea that I frequently muse over myself, Jane with another woman, not the Loreleis or Ericas but someone genuinely nice, a good person. I felt that all of my thoughts and ideas were brought perfectly to life in this. I am Jane and Lisbon through and through, and it makes me unspeakably happy to read a story like this. Thank you for that.

You must review this story in Jane's POV.

First of all, I must say that I really enjoyed this story. I did not know it was on because I originally read it on livejournal. what I love about your story telling style is that I can see these things happening.

I would go on an on, because this isn't much of a review, but I'm kind of on a high from your other story "15 steps".

I will say that I love how you didn't make Joy some villain or have Lisbon become mopey and nonfunctional. I do think she would be upset if Jane dated, but not noticeably.

Ohh, es realmente hermoso; me encantó; debió ser muy difícil para Lisbon ver como Jane pasó la página y continuó al lado de otra persona; como bien dice Teresa al final; peor que perder a alguien, es nunca haberlo tenido; estar cerca de Jane y que nada pase!

Joy fue muy valiente al dejar ir a Jane, me gusta ya que pudo entender lo que pasaba en su corazón; aún queriéndolo a él, se quiso más a sí misma!

En verdad me encantaría y sería súper interesante leer la perspectiva de Lisbon.

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Ohh, it's really beautiful, I loved it so much, I think that must have been difficult for Lisbon to see how Jane continued his life with another person, as Teresa said at the end; it's sad to lose anyone, but worse is never have had to that person, to be close to Jane and that nothing happens!

Joy was very brave to let go Jane, I like, 'cause she could understand what was happening into Jane's heart; even loving him, she preferred her self-esteem!

I'd like to read the Lisbon's perspective.

it was. . . amazing! I read it while listening to Break Even (by the script) and was left shell-shocked. OH MY GOSH!

And I'd love it if you wrote the story from Jane and Lisbon's POV.

i really enjoyed this!

you should write from the others prospective yes...

i'm all ears. or eyes...lol...

I love it. I can't help but I feel *a little* bad for Joy even she "stole" Jane from Lisbon.

Lauriane

Very cool story! I feel really bad for Joy; I love how you manged to make us feel bad for her and hate her for stealing Jane.

I absolutely loved it and would most certaintly read the others!

You read my mind didn't you? I wanted to read a really, really, really great entry for the JF challenge and you provide me with one.

I liked Joy - a lot and there were so many emotions throughout the story. Ah, it was lovely.

Yay, Cat!

He! I'm so glad you wrote an entry for this month! I really liked how you handled the prompt, and I'll admit I was upset at the beginning! I was like...NO! Not another woman! But I did like Joy, so thanks for making me go through a variety of emotions! Great writing!

hard to read jane with someone else and not his lisbon, but you made it all right in the end and that's what counts

what did he whisper in her ear?

O this was so incredibly good! You have NOTHING to worry about when it comes to me loving your writing, because I do love it so so much. You have such an original twist in every story. First with Sophie Miller, then this. It's wonderful, because you explore a different side of Jello and it's really great to read. You also inspire me! I think I would love to see you rewrite this in Jane's or Lisbon's perspective, especially in Lisbon's, because I'm dying to know what she's thinking through all of this.

The ending was lovely, you set it up just right, and it would make sense that Jane would seek out someone similar to him, a safe choice versus Lisbon, but I'm glad he got his "balls" back ;) so to speak. Joy was a wonderful voice for this, great, great job :)

Yana