good work

hahaha, the last sentence pleased me xD

gaaahhh i wish the movie could have had a scene like this. i mean, Neytiri was really seeing Jake for the first time in that scene, you'd wish and hope they would have briefly followed up on that. but oh well :p

lovely oneshot. loved it :D thanks for sharing!

i liked will there be more?

yeah! baby names! ;D

I liked this story, even though I've gotten sufficiently over my initial addiction to Avatar so that fluff is less interesting. Partly I just really like the scene this continues from and the overall idea of Jake and Neytiri interacting without his Avatar. And certainly I find this to be well written, with just the right balance of humor and seriousness. Keep up the good work!

You focused on my favourite scene in the entire movie and elaborated on it beautifully. Thank you. 3

awwh.. this was adorable. :D i loved it very much. and you wrote it incredibly well too. ]

Aww how sweet! I loved it. I loved how Neytiri refused to let Jake be self-conscious about his body, she is such a stubborn cool Na'vi and you captured that well. I loved reading this! c: