Reviews for The End of the Beginning
jeanf chapter 39 . 1/5/2014
Interesting story. I guess h ing all the Russian gangsters dead freed v's soul in a way? She chose Jax-yay!
jeanf chapter 22 . 1/4/2014
Sigh. I'm really not liking v that much. Don't know why she has to make a play for Jax now that's she's with Chibs... Don't respect her
jeanf chapter 14 . 1/4/2014
Good for Hap! He's got my respect. Not playing into the game that v has going on
jeanf chapter 12 . 1/4/2014
Oy! I hope v isn't deliberately trying to cause trouble with Chibs and Jax...whole club may be torn apart.. Do not like v for sleeping around even though Jax does it. Chibs is too personal. At least Jax has generic club sluts
jeanf chapter 6 . 1/4/2014
Liking story. V is one tough cookie there. I hope she and Chibs don't do anything stupid...
loventherussian17 chapter 39 . 12/14/2013
love it
Jessica Gibbs chapter 30 . 7/14/2012
do have a question. do I read your story first or indiejane's first. Or do I read them with what you written mix it with the other story.
Sickandtired212000 chapter 39 . 11/28/2011
Loved the story. I'm too tired to write a more detailed review of the awesomeness of this story, as I've sat up till the early morning hours to finish it. So simply: loved it. Loved V. Team Jax for the win.
Maori kotiro chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
awe he really does care
funkel chapter 22 . 3/18/2011
Team chibs love the story
VisionOfConflict chapter 39 . 6/16/2010
Ok...

Good story...

Made V a little harder then to expect but ok..

And Jax won in the end...as usual right? Hahahaha...

Poor Chibs but hey such is life.

But you showed a little about how cruel humans can be to get what they want or for instant gratification. Good.
griftergirl7 chapter 39 . 6/14/2010
My mind is totally blown... This and indiejane's story have had me hanging on every word... Have loved every intricately-plotted chapter of both stories.

It makes total sense to me that Chibs would cede to Jax - Jax sees himself as a saviour, but isn't quite equipped for the quiet almost-martyrdom required in sacrificing your own wishes for someone you care for and whose situation you understand (even to the extent of not seeing yourself continuing to feature in it)... In a way, there's a parallel between Aisha's laying herself down for Tig and Chibs' giving up V to Jax. Neither action requires praise or recognition from the subject (Tig/V), just a recognition by the doer that however anyone (including them) feels about it, this is what needs to be done..

I'm sure there is all sorts of fall-out to come for everyone involved - V, Jax, Chibs, Tig, Aisha - and the Club... Can't wait for the next part of this epic, hope it's soon!
Bad Company chapter 39 . 6/14/2010
There was a little part of me that wanted her to end up with Chibs, simply for the kiny factor, but her being with Jax makes absolute sense after all that occurred here at the end. I'm guessing she won't need to be "hurt" for a while to come. It was nice to see the Russian threat eliminated (for now?) but we didn't get too much closure, which makes the next installment all the more exciting.

Overall, an amazing story. I never thought I'd get sucked into a Jax/OC fic, but the writing was too fabulous not to. You write the hottest smut. Even the little subtle scenes are sexy. And yet you never lose the drama and angst. I am very much looking forward to the next collaboration - what started as a side note with Aisha turned into an awesome extension of your story. I can't wait to see what you both come up with next.
Hapsgurl80 chapter 39 . 6/14/2010
Great ending cant wait for more
HermioneandMarcus chapter 39 . 6/13/2010
great chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
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