i'm sorry for your loss. i hoped to read more chapter.

Vampire really? This harem is more degrading than what you see from the norm. Their practically slaves and bitches in heat around naruto. Seems like they care more about his power and looks than their being actual romantic feelings. I could care less if their was romance between him and Kushina but the way you went about it was ridiculous and really degrading to all the women in this story.

Hope dont stop this pleaseee i like all your story

I feel like the tit expansion was excessive and unnecessary sure give them a bit of a bump of you want but going from a B to an f is borderline moronic sure the hokage know about the bloodline but what happened to not sharing clan secrets they won't exactly blend in do you understand how big bra sizes are. e.g " my friend tenten went around to her friend's place with tennis ball size breast and then later came out with breast the size of watermelons and sprouts bones like the extinct WATER country clan... Oohhh shit gotta get me some of that." And giving tayuya foot wide areolas the fuck benifits is that it literally a slightly different/sensitive skin it is not like "Ahhh yes thats what I love on a girl foot wide areolas when they are that big they pour condensed milk." No it doesn't work like that they is no reason it in any way shape or form

Great job

Wow your Naruto is incredibly arrogant and a creep...

Wait, if naruto was in his mind? Why couldn't he see the limitations of his techniques and how to kill him? He was there long enough to figure out everything about his curse seal... Sooooo... Tayuya is only two years older then naruto so she SHOULD be 9 in this one. Kimmimaru is only THREE years older then naruto and he was supposed to be oroci's new body. Girls don't start getting "curves" until 11-12 (and that's still a early developer).. So she should still be as "straight as a post". At her AGE she shouldn't be much more then (even with make up) a "baby doll". I always thought it was funny with orochimaru actually, his PREVIOUS host was an adult, then he was going to make kimmimaru into one at 16 then sasuke at 12... He keeps going for younger and younger boys.. doesn't he know that not only is that disgusting, but it will probably SHORTEN his time in each body?(occult logistics) At least he's bright enough (in canon) to not even ATTEMPT naruto, he KNOWS he's NOT A MATCH for the nine-tails. (he'd be nothing more then a ANT next to that beast).

Orochimaru for the MOST part, is just a PEST... an ANNOYANCE... While the leaf is fighting the akutski and NUMEROUS other actually world-changing threats, he keeps taking "pot-shots" at them, and ALWAYS gets a BEAT-DOWN for his trouble. He's like a running gag that has lost it's appeal. So he beat up an old man? What's next, steal the cane from a blind guy? Sneak up on a deaf person? Stab someone that's unconscious? See? None of these are really "impressive".

Interesting, to call Orochimaru's mind "a library in hell", I've found the best way to deal with an opponent in one of those is simply start a fire and "BURN IT ALL TO THE GROUND".

Well I don't see the reason for the instant antagonistic relationship from naruto toward kyuubi, but other then that.. Good chap.

Wow. Just wow. How bad can this story be. You really need to work on your writing and story telling skills. Lots of plot holes with no answers anywhere. No explaining where and what the "bloodline" is.

I just don't see: orochimaru, kabuto, (especially these two NUMB SKULLS, as they are just too stupid NOT to keep "poking the dragon") obitedo, itachi, kasamie, hiden, sasuke, dederia, kakazu, sasori or even zetsu as being much of a THREAT against a REAL vampire (let alone one backed by a demon lord) they just AREN'T! Nageto maybe, but even there it's JUST a threat. NOT a real problem. A vamp like that is a(n) (un)natural disaster, like a hurricane or an earthquake, an act of god, you can't fight it, you can only do two things: 1. STAY OUT OF ITS WAY, 2. START RUNNING AND HOPE YOU SURVIVE LONG ENOUGH FOR IT TO MOVE ON TO WRECK SOMEONE ELSE!

Naruto in vamp stories I think represents the nightmares/fears of those after him. I mean the akutski want peace, he shows that's IMPOSSIBLE, Orocimaru wants immortality, he already has it and orochimaru NEVER WILL, sasuke wants power, he'll never be at naruto's level, danzo wants control, he'll never HAVE naruto's amount and naruto is something HE will NEVER have control of, the third wants naruto to love and worship the people like he does, naruto FEEDS OFF THEM AND KILLS THEM without remorse. In every case a vamp naruto embodies everything that TERRIFIES them! Every failure, every dream that will never happen. (the akutski will fail, orochi will die, danzo will be forgotten and be unimportant, sasuke will always be weak, and the village has created it's own demise and the third has been an abject FAILURE to everyone that depended on him) see? Now magnify that with power they can't match, and they see all their fears becoming a reality and there is NOTHING they can do about it. (I expect mass suicides)

Kinda makes you wonder what the barrier around konoha is FOR doesn't it? Since it doesn't seem to really HELP them at all and it doesn't keep out snake face or pein or ANYONE ELSE, (including a somehow surprise AIR-STRIKE *naruto the movie: bonds*) I'm betting kishi hadn't written in that this EXISTED "from the formation of konoha" yet when this story, the movie "bonds" and many other fanfics were written. (that's the problem with ADDING too much later in the story, it makes stuff like this make NO SENSE, like the fact that the impure res thing DOESN'T WORK on people eaten by the reaper.. Kinda makes that scene during the crush a very stupid one)

The Uchiha with the most extensive library? Um I didn't even know they could write without copying it! Seems to me (because sasuke never displays many jutsu while in konoha) that they actually don't have much in the way of WRITTEN DOWN jutsu, they kinda just copy off each other. (I mean one look and ya got it). Also aren't the uchiha SUPPOSED to be the cops in this one? So the sound five were beaten by a bunch of GENNIN! So either these cops REALLY suck(always a possibility because the uchiha are pompous pricks that think they are FAR stronger then they're weak butts actually ARE) or you are waaaay the sound idiots.
Actually tsunade ALONE could kill orochimaru, and in canon SHE KNOWS IT! (and so does he) Three of them together? Is OVERKILL. (notice orochimaru NEVER shows up again in konoha, while another SANNIN is there, let alone two of them). I THOUGHT everyone "KNEW" going into the fight that naruto could kill orochimaru (like not even a doubt) so WHY the heck did you let him live?

Why would naruto hate the fourth for sealing the kyuubi in him? It's given him phenomenal power and it's not like it's affected him socially (besides even if it DID, you wouldn't hate him for sealing the thing, OR even the thing for getting sealed... You'd hate the stupid, cock-sucking idiot that TOLD everyone where it went) for the other part well, it's kinda tough to HATE someone you never met.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Thanks