This was just amazing

Brilliant, loved this. One of my favourite stories on the whole site.

...Huh I was right that it would be bittersweet I guess. Amazing story in all its glory though. Truly one of the best among the Bioshock stories here! Although it would be amazing to see an epilogue after this. Maybe show us how the survivors are living years after this event, and how the little ones grew up.

Gods damned it. Delta deserves better for what he has gone through. Poor man literally went through hell and back to rescue his jailers, and all he got from them is a slow and painful death.

Hmm I am envisioning that the ending of this story will likely be sad and bittersweet, possibly even fury-inducing to those that love a good old vanilla happy ending. I just hope that Eleanor, Mr. Jack Ryan and his adopted daughters are safe after all of this. They deserve a happy ending for what its worth, even Tenenbaum.

Whew! At least Delta managed to rescue Sigma and Eleanor killed the intruders without too much damage to the house. Things are getting pretty heated up, literally in most cases. I just hope that Eleanor and the little ones are cared for as they live in the surface.

Wow the way you constructed the plot points of Jack's investigation and Delta's plan to rescue the sisters was beyond amazing. Although I am slightly worried about that scheming rat in the last part, and god knows what the US would do if they got a hold of Rapture in all its horror and glory.

Oh man the prologue of this story is damn amazing. Shame that I only discovered this masterpiece today. I'm gonna binge read this for the next 2 weeks or so! Kudos!

But what happened next? Did the others get to safety? How does the c.i.a. respond? Well, we know jack dies happily in a hospital with his daughters due to the happy epilogue (the game has been out for years and if your reading this you know what happened in 1, so I feel a spoiler warning would be overkill,) but what about Alice and Elinor? I assume sigma and grace foster them and they grow up, but how? Still, Delta went out like a bad ass like a jason vorhees version of Darth Vader (seriously, you give delta a plasma sword, the ability to speak, and paint his armor black, underwater Vader). A minor few misspelled words, a few words that had misplaced letters (lik ethis) but all together, you probs won't even read this anyways but, I loved this. Loved how everything was connected together.

...this was amazing

My congratulations, a beatiful piece of art about Delta,.introspection like i've rarely seen and an elic last fight.

Delta a man who has moved heaven and earth just so his family can be free from a haunting nightmare.

Yes, Delta. A true father would move heaven and Earth to get his daughter back. Mark Meltzer is one such instance, and there are many, many others.

but I still like the story XA

on account of an evil Russian even somehow insulting...