Reviews for The Yellow Flash of Kiri
idk23e4 chapter 17 . 7/20
post new chapterrr
Guest chapter 17 . 5/20
Fuck you. No satisfaction, no resolution. It's just you trying to shoehorn that Naruto can;t feel any emotions because every cunt in this fic automatically assumes it'll dictate him for the rest of his life. For fucks sake asshole, if you feel angry for being late for an appointment, it doesn't mean you'll hate everything forever. You are immature sack of shit, author, thank fuck this fic is dead.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/20
Yeah, Naruto was out of line. It was horrible of him to feel upset for not even an hour after finding out his grandfather figure lied to him, and his mother abandoned him. But of course Yugito is right, she's a woman so she always right regardless, right?

Fuck you.
HTTYDGuest chapter 17 . 5/14
Iove killer bee.
SomewhatDark chapter 17 . 5/7
This fic is soooo good so far its really thrilling with good ideas and it leaves you with a lot of emotions after each chapter. I want the author to continue this project although I don’t have any hope since the story has been abandoned for 9 years now.
SomewhatDark chapter 8 . 5/7
Dude wtf? Like kushina’s attitude left me speechless. I understand that she may have PTSD because of the sight she seen but still. WTF
Csw chapter 17 . 4/26
Story so far is excellent while I truly hope you would continue the story I have no hope for that it being 9 years without an update truth be told I'd rather have a story and with a crap ending or bittersweet ending then for a story to end without an ending.
ImperfectionPerfection chapter 7 . 4/22
Oh hell no, fuck you Kushina. Are you kidding me!? I never expected this monkey wrench.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6
Absolutely fucking retarded
Beast Mode92 chapter 8 . 11/4/2019
This story was very good, but the Kushina hating Naruto has turned me off to this story.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/18/2019
That's so awesome please tell me there another story arc of yellow flash of mist chapter 18.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
Naruto
I-Nex-I chapter 17 . 8/7/2019
I really hate the characterization of some characters in this, Kushina being the most obvious. Still, you’re actual technical writing is decent, and there’s so little fem!Haku stories. Hope you update or rewrite. Though the chances of that are slim to none
Guest chapter 7 . 7/10/2019
I liked this chapter Since when did Kushina had green étés though?
ghostmarine51 chapter 8 . 6/10/2019
Kushina deserves to die. simple as that
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