this story it is so beautiful! amazing work ,its so bittersweet !

Awesome story

I know that the story is said to be complete, but come on man! This story is so awesome, you have to continue this. Honestly, this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read -and i've read quite a lot of them- please man, if I ave to get on my hands and knees to beg you to continue, I will. Trust me on that! P.S: Did I say how much this story rules? GO KANE LAM! :D

Another great installment, definitely one of if not the best ME fanfic on the site.

I loved this story as well. It's quite rich: it has comedy, action, drama and romance! I loved the battle with the Reaper in Chapter 3, and Shepard's feelings for Liara were well portrayed as well.

I also love how you play EDI teasing Shepard and Liara. Epic!

And I can't believe Liara and Shepard are marrying. This is super cute! I hope you develop that.

Just to let you know, I will read your other story ('The Day the Sun Stood Still') tomorrow. I know you are a bit concerned about your writing skills, and I will try my best to help you,

EDI's comment about recording the moment for posterity's sake literally made me laugh out loud - as did the rest of the chapter. AWESOME! It takes a bit to make me actually LOL, and this is one of those chapters! Bravo! I think I'll read it again so I can laugh some more.

Liara never fails to amuse. And I always had the feeling the turian Councillor was a bit off. BEST LINE EVER: ...garitas. Getting margaritas. ROFL!

That scene with Daniel was so powerful I almost cried. Same with the scene with Shepard going after Liara. And now, of course, I'm on the edge of my seat. Good thing this story's complete, or I'd be writhing in agony!

Congratulations, you have officially scared the sh** out of me. I LOVE how you're using Revelation in the story - it really adds that much more power, and makes it that much scarier. I am seriously freaked out here, and I really need to read more and see what happens before I lose it. Back to the story!

Lol Poor Shepard and Liara. Where was Samara in all this? And who is the person linked to Tali?

Can't wait for their further adventures.

I'm sending you my dentist bill. This chapter gave me a damn cavity. Oh but it's so sweet...

Keep the great writing coming!

AW SO CUTE!

I kinda feel bad for the guy who almost blurted out that Shepard and Liara were gonna get married. xD

And I like how Liara doesn't fully understand what the ring symbolizes. She's adorable.

What I look forward to is actually being able to read a long and complete story, so I hope you don't delay too long in publishing the remainder of the story.

Liara's okay, right? :[

I hope Shepard rips that Reaper apart.