i kinda liked it

I love this one! Can you do another pearlshipping fanfiction under my request

Awesome fanfic! Making Paul jealous, awes some!

Sooooo cute! i love it!

God, I hate Paul for how he treated Dawn. He's such a dick.

I really did love this story, aside from the fact that Paul's an ass. This story will be going on my faves.

Keep it up :D

Yeah, Paul's a dick :P

It would've been nice if Ash had a little bigger part in this story... oh, well. It was great!

I loved the song! :D Ha, ha, Paul, you lost! No worries, Dawn, Paul is just rotten sewage. X)

But I like how you made this into a Pearlshipping story! I loved this oneshot! I think you should put songs into your stories more often. ;)

I'm off to listen to the song on Youtube!

~Ciao!

I love that Song, I'm listening to it right now *dances to the tune* anyways I love how you made Pearlshipping! it Fits with the song! Awesome!

bah, I hate you Paul! treating Dawn like that! *throws a bunch of bricks at him*

don't worry, I'll deal with him later )

anyway, this was good!

I loved it (:

keep writing!

awesome :D I really enjoyed it :)

-AshXDawn4Ever-

Great job on this fic. It was very entertaining.

Ok it great

Paul is just that... low scum, in any case, nice fic! althought it was a little confusing at the part when Dawn acuses Paul, awesome fic anyway!

nice story. loved it.