I love the Gor in this very well done

While I thought the story was rather hot, I still don't see the appeal of bottoms being willing to focus solely on their master's pleasure, to the point where they believe they only have worth if they are serving their master. People like that have serious self-esteem problems.

*nosebleed* holy...shit... that was fucking hot as hell

HAHAHAHA! XD was that supposed to be angsty cause I was laughing so hard, no offense

I did enjoy it though 0

masochist cloud is so sexy

Being masochistic is a side even I don't see in Cloud, but I really really don't mind. Because it makes him say things aloud that are so very true. *Master, I am not worthy of your attention,* for example. Cloud's not worthy of Sephiroth.

And this line made me grin. "I will take great pleasure in ending your miserable existence." I mean... this is so Sephiroth. XD

And Cloud as slave... I was guilty of making him one as well. But I made him Genesis' slave. For the plot's sake.

Thank you for indulging my vanity.

Yours,

~Nephilim.

Another great story. Cloud makes a good slave, Sephiroth is so lucky.

I quite liked this.

Its hard to find stories that actually know what true dom and sub relation ships are like.

Thank you very much.

I should have reviewed a long time ago...this was utterly sinful! Well, shall I say it, sinfully delightful! This is just the best way to have our little Cloud and Sephiroth. Of course, this just goes along with A Perfect Bottom I assume? I hope that I may be right. Keep writing these treats for us! I love your style.

sephiroth sure didnt want cloud to feel pleasure liked the story :)

this is...sweet? i guess is the word i'm looking for? O

Oh wow! that was perfect, i thought Cloud was way too submissive. But overall the story is great! Please write more

Merna.

That was very well written and...really really hot...*Pinches nose to stop the blood flow* I mean...wow. You did a good job discribing the setting and everything else...*Drools* Ahem, uh...I think you should keep writing...maybe a sequal to this one...*Nose starts bleeding again* Ah...good job! I hope to see more!

~Rain Megami

WHUT D:

THIS WAS SO SCARY ;_;