This was a joy to read!

I'm cooler than an ice cube? I prefer hotter than the sun, mah nigga. Dude, Ima black ass bitch, ready to bust your ass. But anyway, Dash was basically training Danny in secret? Interesting.

:) AWESOME. Seriously, this is really good writing, and seriously creative.

If you're going to do other characters (which I think you should), then you should either change the name of this fic or put them on different ones.

Hm, Dash really IS out of character here...way too smart ;D But I liked it anyway, interesting theory...

This is a fresh take on Dash. I love how you don't have him as a heartless idiot. Nice job! I really enjoyed it!

You make sick for what you made Dash to Danny. Even though he isn't all bad, I still hate him for the bully he is due to my experience with bullies.

Since you made Dash find out Danny's secret, you could have made him stop bullying Danny. But, no. You made him give out an excuse that fighting dirty helps him to survive. Well, guess what, pal? It doesn't.

Bullying doesn't help survive. Instead, it gets them into bigger trouble. Besides, these aren't the dayso f Vikings anymore. So get that "survival of the fittest" crud out of your head.

As for you people who compliment this jerk of an author for the reasons behind Dash's bullying, you're as blind and delusional as she is. Bullying never did people good.

I mean, can Dash have compassion by roughing Danny up? That just teaches him to be a bully.

Imagine if I bullied all of you to death. Would you like that?

An intresting outlook.

Niiice. I love pieces that play around with the characters and give them more depth... make them less cartoony. You definitely did that here with Dash. Bravo.

I loved reading all of his reasons for still beating up on Danny, teaching him to "fight dirty" (loved that line) and how that was his contribution toward protect Amity as best he could.

Really interesting twist on the show. I would love seeing how you handled any other characters... other A-listers, Lancer, even the Fentons. It would be quite fun to read, just like this was! :D

Thanks!

Sapphireswimming

Something about this reminds me eerily of Skulker...I like it.

DANG!

You wrote this so well, it sounds like it could have come from the desk of Butch Hartman. An excellent job with a a rather one-dimensional character.

Cool.

Not a lot of people write in Dash's point of view, but you did really well. Showing the somewhat nice side of Dashy-boy. .

Aww dash is sweet in a demented sort of way. I never thought i"d see dash as helpful. Nice story.

Sincerly MFL

Awesome! Nice take on Dash's unexplored character. Want to see more!

Awesome! :D You should...IDK. Have an instance where Dash accidentally calls Danny 'Phantom'.

It may work for another chappie.